| Reviews for The Last Laugh |
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The Background Conquerer chapter 61 . 4/2 This was the most AWESOME story in all your Ultimate Spider-Man stories! THIS is my FIRST favorite of all! Now, THIS is how I imagined a series finale in fanfiction! I was GLAD you brought the Green Goblin back and made him the main antagonist of this story! I mean I never liked what they did with Season 4 and I imagine that it never exists. |
OfficialUSMWriter chapter 61 . 7/28/2019 It's nice how things were all wrapped up in the end. Good story! It was a fun read! And I'm really glad I got to enjoy it! Good luck with all your other projects! Sounds like you're gonna have a blast! :D Once again, really enjoyed this story! 3 It was awesome! |
OfficialUSMWriter chapter 60 . 7/28/2019 Oooof - this isn't good. The majority of them are tired. That's never a good sign! Fight strongly, heroes! Fight strong! Oh my gosh, Peter's reaction to eing referred to as a boy-toy. XD XD XD XD He's not even offended, he's seems in awe. "Me? Ava's boy toy? *smiles proudly" NO no no no no no no no no Petey, keep working the machine. You can beat him to a pulp once you've got it all decoded. C'mon man, priorities. Goblin won't be doing shit if he's not even the Goblin anymore. But I'll admit, I got a little emotional when his original teamed backed him up. I - I just *wipes tears from my eyes* they're just so grown up. Ooooh, title drop! hahah! Love it! |
OfficialUSMWriter chapter 59 . 7/28/2019 Heeheehee, I love their dynamic. I've always loved me some good spider-bro's and their spider-bro's friendship. Makes me feel all happy and gushy inside. WHy do I feel like the reason they're not running into many guards is because Goblin was anticipating their arrival/attack despite telling Fury that a "rhino doesn't meddle with a fly" cause he's actually kinda concerned they'll actually DO something, but this whole operation is going to go sideways cause thats what he predicted they'd do and someone back is now going to happen!? "THat's a lovely picture" LOL Spidey Okay, Spidey, my boy, my cherished Spider-ling. As much as I'd love for you to express your love for Ava, we should probably save that for AFTER the rescue mission, you know, when everyone isn't in mortal danger. OH! OH! I CALLED IT! FREAKING GOBLIN IS THERE! NOOOO! JUST LET THEM BREAK FREE! |
OfficialUSMWriter chapter 58 . 7/28/2019 Annnnd I'm back for this story as well! Spidey, my deranged Goblin-Boy. I've returned. YAY! Save your friends! And the rest of the city while your at it I guess XD LOL Ew, Goblin, why are you so creepy dude? Jeez. Can't go one day without making SOMEONE uncomfortable. AND BACK AWAY FROM AVA! MY DAUGHTER WILL HAVE NONE OF YOUR DISGUSTINGNESS! :C "Does the rhino meddle himself with the affairs of the fly?" Okay, okay, I admit that was a pretty good line. Dam you, Goblin, dam you. "You forgot something though: flies can swarm." AND DIRECTOR FURY WITH THE FREAKING COME BACK! HECK YEAH! EAT THAT, GOBLIN, YOU SUCKER! WHOO! GO get' em, my children! Fight! FIght! Fight! Fight! Fight! Fight! |
The Timeless Writer chapter 61 . 1/11/2019 Overall, I enjoyed The Last Laugh, it was fun, dramatic and all that good stuff. I understand why there isn't a sequel as I can see where else you can go with this. Overall, This was a great story. good job. |
Death Fury chapter 61 . 1/10/2019 Loved the story, great work my friend |
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 61 . 1/10/2019 Animorphs!? I’m all fired up! Peter thank you for proving nice guys can get hot girls. Happy new year! KEEP BEING AWESOME! |
Sport21 chapter 61 . 1/10/2019 another award winning story, I really lost myself in this story it draws you in and emerses you in the world you created. you still prove without a doubt your skills set the bar for the standard congrats on another best reader. |
Sport21 chapter 61 . 1/10/2019 another award winning story, I really lost myself in this story it draws you in and emerses you in the world you created. you still prove without a doubt your skills set the bar for the standard congrats on another best reader. |
Nobel Six chapter 61 . 1/10/2019 Excellent ending to an excellent story. You get two thumbs way up |
The Timeless Writer chapter 60 . 12/30/2018 Damn, I can't wait to see the epilogue you got planned out. |
Nobel Six chapter 60 . 12/30/2018 Excellent chapter, I loved the battle and the emotions. I can’t wait to see what happens next |
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 60 . 12/30/2018 Title reference! So glad tiger finally kissed that fool. KEEP BEING AWESOME! |
Death Fury chapter 60 . 12/30/2018 Excellent work |