This is one of the dumbest story is the entire fandom

Sqweeeee! Love it!

Amazing! Shocking! Just WOW!

This is really good!

loved the story. wish you would write a sequel about Harry's second time around.

turn this into a full story please

I'm going to take you on that your first PS. and tell a bit about your grammar. I believe you should be a bit more careful with your sentences as many are Run On sentences. You need to take you story and read it out loud, if it's too long then you need a stop them and start a new. Comas don't always do the job and sometimes two comas are fine but three and four are too much. You should also consider the rhythm of the sentence, because like a said before, there's a point where they become too much and a stop is needed. With all of that been said, I managed to understand the story and I can tell it'll be even better with a fix here and there. I loved how fresh this idea with the squibs is. Good Job but keep working, I'm sure that next time you can make you great ideas be more fluid to the readers. :)

XO A very avid HP reader, that is sadly, too shy to write her own.

OH I really liked this. But I wanted to actually read some of his new life. I mean it would be so great to read it.