Wow, it’s cool, I didn’t need my heart anyways...

I really enjoyed this. It felt realistic to me, the way that everyone was reacting as well as the situation they were in. I am always worried about what will happen to Adrien as I can only forsee future pain and hurt for him. I liked the feel of this- they where in the eye of the storm, and as children in the normal world , they didnt really have any power over what was about to happen. It was really good, I am so glad you posted it. I think the only thing I wonder is why Adrien didnt tell ladybug who he was. Though it is absolutely a valid choice for him to have made. And the story is still great without anything resolving the fact he is cat noir too. Thank you for making this :)

So you can rip out my heart and soul in this fandom, too? Nice. I don't know how you come up with these stories and plits but they're Genius. Total props to you and your mind and I'm so happy you write for this fandom too. Gaaaah, endless possibilities to how this one scene can end.

This is amazing! It made me want to rush in there and DO something. The implication left me breathless and wanting to know so much more. This is such a dark and sad twist, but a fascinating and heart wrenching one.

Seriously though you have to be an author. Have you published your own books yet? I would love to buy and read any of your original works one day. X)

This was a fantastic read. It shows a different side of Adrien than we usually see, and that was interesting to see. I wish it could've been longer, but I'm happy that I got to read it. It left me wanting more.
Never ever stop writing. You're seriously talented

One made me happy
Now I worry
*attacks screen*
Noooooo don't take Adrian!

It feels unfinished, but very nicely done. Keep writing

It's perfect. Extraordinary. I'm really impresed. Now listen. You will NEVER stop writing. You're more than good at it. Write everywhere, inspire yourself and never give up on it. You're talented

The detail in this was perfect! I love how the after fact of winning wasn't what it seemed it would be, and they'd all have to pay with the consequences. Shame there won't be more of it... Thanks for the read!