Are we ever going to get a sequel about what happens while the girl grows up.

sorry, didn't mean to post that last review...
So far, so good. I really like this story!

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Excellent. I love your story! The only issue I have with it is that I wish you expanded on it a bit. However, very well done!

I don't know if you still check this account, but I have only just recently stumbled onto your story, and I felt compelled to tell you that it is a magnificent piece of work. I am usually very apprehensive and cynical about finding smart writing in fan fiction, but your writing has really went above and beyond my standards. You really added real, and compelling plot that draws on the real pain and tragedy of innocent prisoners. I do feel like I am pulling at straws here when I make such a general statement, but I am truly flabbergasted by this work.

Congratulations on writing an amazing, amazing story. I so enjoyed reading it, and hope that other fan fiction writers learn to take after you.

Sincerely,

Reader

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That was amazing. I've never read anything like it! Brilliant work!

Good story. The first that I found that had that kind of plot. If yeh know any other stories like that: please e-mail and tell me.

This is by far the best OC that I have ever read. This story was in general wonderful, and just so passionate. Thank you so much for writing it.

This was interesting to read. Touching even. A sentimental orc fic done well. I am impressed!

Man, I've liked Orcs for a long time. (

You're a great writer, but I'm sorry to say I detest the plot.

Petra here:

Aww [insert 4 more Ws because stinks]. Beautiful story. And you only have 20 reviews for 19 chapters. Do you know what? I can't believe that. I have read a LOT of Lord of the Rings fanfics in my time here on , and I hold this in 3rd place. That's saying a lot, considering 1st place was "Into Your Arms" and 2nd "The Wall That Fell".

Maybe it's beacuse it is a Theodred romance. And people don't look for Theodred romances. I wasn't. I found your story because I had an idea for a story but I wanted to see how many stories were like it. Searched for "half orc" in the summary. Well, enough of my rambling on how dissapointed I am about the number of reviews you've gotten.

And on to what I love about the story. There has to be a lot of things that I love. I love your style of literature. I love how you have shown Elana as such a developed character. She certainly has a lot of feeling and a lot of depth. Again, better than many characters I have seen. I also love your/her views on keeping her half-orcen child, even when so many persuaded her not to. I am pro-life, and I assume you are too. If you aren't (I would find that quite strange) I have nothing against you. Lastly, my favourite moment in the story. Her singing. Absolutley beautiful. It fits. It triggers everything. And I could hear it. I really really felt her voice in my head. No I am not crazy. And I can still hear it. And see. I can see the field, and the grating, and her pale face behind it, and hear her voice quaver- she sings low and sad and slow.

I'm sorry. Maybe I am crazy. Even so, that has to have been my favourite part, and I will always remember that moment in your story. This story /will/ stay with me the rest of my life.

No suggestions for you. No way you could fix it. Amazing and beautiful in every single way.

I will certainly suggest this story to my friends, and it's going on my favourites list. And so are you, on my favourite authours list. I will try out your sequel, but I like this as it stands alone.

~Please continue to share your wonderful writings with us all. I apologize if my giving this such high recognition brings my flamer, Kikiarawen, aka Kiki here.

~Morithil Undomiel Greenleaf, Tarien o Eyrn Lasgaelen, of The ELven Sister In Laws (I share this account with a friend)~

NO! You can't end this marvellous story. You can't. *breaks down and cries*

An AMAZING STUNNING ENDING! It was a great fic and fun to read!

Can't wait for your next fic!

Your story is great. I really love it. And sorry for not writing earlier. I hope you will write a sequel to it about Elana and Deore. To see how their life will go on and if Elanas dream-visions come true.

And it is interesting if thinking more deeply about the creating of Sarumans Uruk-Hai. As though I like the way it is solved in the movies the way you describes it is the more likely. I think Tolkien has said something like that orcs get their children like everone else. And to get half-breeds this is the only way.

O_O

.this isn't really the end, is it? You're going to write a sequal, right?

.and wouldn't the "author of her torment" be you?