Oh, these chapters had me crying as much as the show did. I love the changes though, Rose's desire to help the Doctor to remember to smile and to live. Beautiful story!

*tears*

*sniffle s* that's OK I didn't need my heart in one piece any way...

Interesting explanation for why they wouldn't have gotten around to telling Jackie. Loved how Mickey picked up on it.

Wow! That was awesome! I loved all the little nuances. "Not if I see you first." You had me crying.
Thank you for posting.

I am glad that you gave the details of the bond ripping apart. that really shows why Rose is determined to get back to the Doctor. excellent prequel writing.

Now see that was so much more satisfying than the real thing hooboy

That is a much better conversation on the beach than the one in canon. And not just because of the "I love you" thing. But the whole thing about bad wolf is wonderful.

This is heartbreakingly beautiful. I made me tear up. Hope to see more soon.