I cried so hard I gave myself a headache and had to lie down for a few hours. I couldn't stop reading while I was lying down and made my headache worse. It's just that addicting and good.

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i/So cool!i

Remember my review on your first fic of this series? Yeah, that rant about Keith fitting into this and other stuff? You did ALL OF IT. And MORE. I could not be any happier. Gosh, this is a good series. I can't wait to read more! I'm a sucker for connections between people, roles people take up in these team situations, seeing what it takes for characters to be broken, healed, or re-made...man, good job. Just a great, great job. I can't say enough about your work. Onto the next story!

As Always,

Happy Writing~

Awww! This is so cute! I love it! Platonic Shance rules!

Anybody read Corans lines in that accent he has

"We're gonna nap now and it's gonna be awesome."-Hunk
best line

Wow, you write some powerful stuff. Just binge-read the whole thing and now I have a headache, but it was my fault to read an angsty tearjerker fic when I'm nursing a head cold. Feels nice after a good cry though.
I really love what you did in exploring the different characters' depths here to phenomenal effect. The only hiccup I had reading this was that it wasn't always clear where the point of view was changing between characters. Just a little something to keep in mind, since shifting POV's can make things confusion.
Cheers and happy future writing!

Lord almighty, these two are adorable. And I'm so grateful that it's so platonic. Need more of that in this fandom.

The card game part of this chapter made me breathe a sigh of relief, but I loved Coran's conversation with Blue. He always did seem smarter than the paladins gave him credit for.

This is so excruciatingly beautiful I cannot put it into words. The writing is flawless, the characterisation is perfection, the olot is moving and believable. An amazing continuation from the first segment and a true pleasure to read. I commend you on a job amazingly well done. A small, personal aside, as it happened to come on whilst reading this diamond in the rough, I feel the song Unwell by Matchbox Twenty describes this story amazingly.

Kudos to you, my fellow writer. I will definately be perusing your other works in the not so distant future!

This series is the one, and only one, that convinced me to have a good, long cry about everything that was troubling me in life, especially the scene where the whole team sits down and talks about what they've been hurt by. It's been really cathartic and helpful and I just want to thank you for writing this angstfest because it's just... exactly what I've needed.

Socially acceptable public cuddling? It just reminded me I haven't had one in year. I want a piggyback ride now, thanks to you!

Anyways love this story.

AWWW THEY BROS! :') THIS IS SO GOOD! :3

*hands you a cookie* :D Thank you so much for taking the time to write this! :) I absolutely love this series so far! And the rest of it so far is in my bookmarks, I believe, so I'll just keep on going X3 I can't wait to read more, so I'll go ahead and get to the third part X3 hahaha Good luck with your writing! :)

I now fell bad for everyone (And you. Dear gods, I'm sorry you had to go through that)