Damn this is sad.

The lack of details makes these events hard to place. Does this end post-V3? AU?

I wish this was longer, but regardless; well done.

I cried at this because of how much this touched my heart and how I somehow relate to Neo in this fanfic. Your writing is great, no character was OOC. It's really sad and this is the second fanfic that actually made me cry, not lying. And tears are actually still dropping from my eyes while I write this. Keep up the great work.

Oh wow! This was an amazing look into Neo's life, I loved the way you wrote her, it seemed pretty believable, I also liked the way that you wrote Cinder, Mercury and Emerald; they also seemed very believable.

There were no spelling mistakes that I saw, I felt so bad for Neo, you made her very relatable and believable, I can actually see Neo write what she felt/thought, because we haven't heard her speak; so well done with this!

This is by far, one of the most well written stories I have seen in here. It is truly beautiful, albeit sad. I rarely favorite and follow authors and their stories. . . However this wonderful peace of art deserves more recognition than it will probably get. You are truly an inspiration.

Many congratulations,
RemnantSoul