THIS STORY IS AMAAAAZZIIIINNGGGGGGG ! SJSJSJSJDKD I LOVE IT SO MUCH! ITS SO GOOD FOR SO MANY REASONS! I LOVE CAMPBELL ANS I LOVE HOW YOU WRIT AND THE PLOT IS LIKE? REALLY GOOD AND INTERESTING! YOU DID SUCH A GOOD JOB!

I absolutely understand Campbell's reasoning for basically giving Ed and Al the 'finger'. I mean, the last time they saw them Ed practically tried to KILL them, and Al did NOTHING but sit there and watch, making him just as guilty by inaction. Then they have the audacity to beg for them to come back to THEM because Scar might kill them?! Didn't they just try to do that themselves the last time they met?! So why the fuck do they care?! They just fucking told them to go and commit suicide, if running away with 'your homicidal friend' is their interpretation of 'go kill yourself'! It just pisses me off how hypocritical Ed and Al are, trying to take the higher moral ground. If I was them, I would be having much disdain for the Elric brothers. Even I would PREFER Scar over them! At least, Scar didn't try to kill them nor force information out of them.

When are you going update? I'm looking forward to more!

I hate how every FMA author make religion to be a bad thing. It's offensive! And sends out a bad message like 'religion is bad' or 'people who are religious are stupid'. Being a Christian myself, it really pisses me off to see religion to be treated as some sort of monstrous cult. We know Leto is bad, but that doesn't mean every religion is. This is an FMA stereotype that needs to be fixed. It'd be interesting if someone were to make a character who's Catholic or Christian (there's a difference) or something.

All I got to say is your MC is a pussy with no back bone, really being bullied into speaking when you can say 'I don't want to talk about it' especially next chapter further proving how pathetic your MC is. You'll probably be bullied into spilling all your secrets soon enough especially the one about you being from somewhere else, that's how predictable you are hopefully you'll prove me wrong or your fics dead or you are considering when this was updated.

I love it so far!

That was one of the best summaries I have ever read.

HHHMMMMMM I'M VERY INTERESTED.

No seriously my interest just skyrocketed, it's not often people focus on Scar and he's one of my favourite characters.

I like how the Elrics didn't just take an instant liking to Campbell. No Mary Sueness in sight.

Wahoo! You're back! For the most part...but that's fine, we've all got to deal with life. Honestly I'm just excited to see a notification telling me this story updated! Man, I don't think I could put up traveling with Yoki for more than a few minutes, let alone a week. And training with Mei? Sounds painful, but still awesome! Ah Camp, you're loyal, I'll give you that. Thanks for the update! Now if only I could get my own story in gear and bang out a chapter this week...

Still as good as always! And don't worry about your updating speed; everyone has their own life and things to attend to. Your health and other priorities come before the story, so no need to rush anything.

That said, you still have an awesome grip on your writing and characterization! And "probably is riddled with a lot of errors" isn't really accurate, since the few mistakes I spotted were just minor verb tense agreement stuff. Aside from that little detail, I really liked the... how should I say it... "happy reunion scene"? I'll just call it that. The way you write it makes it surprisingly easy to picture the whole scene in your head and the fact that you had a lines focused on Campbell's emotions makes it easy to relate with the readers.

Keep up the great work and stay strong!

Oh man, that sucks. Can't wait until you come back, an

Mei's in the crew now, awesome! Also, alkahestry healing! So, Cam is gonna learn alkahestry now? Cool, though, I feel like being from another dimension is going to make it harder to learn the more internal/mental part of alkahestry. And yikes, poor Campy having to see Scar kill those two...they did kind of have it coming, they should have know who they were hunting down. Awesome chapter by the way, can't wait for the next!
(It's okay. I changed my username a little while ago because...eh, I was bored and I felt like it needed a bit of a tweak, so don't worry about it.)

I love that she can't suddenly read the language, but I think she should learn it.
Please update soon! I'm dying to see Campbell do some alchemy

This seems pretty interesting so far:)
I'm reading Fahrenheit 451 too. I hate it so much.

Uwa~ I love this story! Not only is it nicely written with a nice plot, you also come up with original and interesting ideas. Keep up the good work!

Amazing chapter keep going!