Oh wow, I read part of this before it was finished and then lost track or forgot or whatever, but I'm so glad because I got to read this chapter again. So many funnies!

Shemp is obviously Harry Potter, M.O.D.

We need more

I like the story but there were giant gaps and Leaps and Bounds and it made it really hard to follow at times.

So very well done! And I'm only half way though.

I had hoped it would be a Buffy/Dexter fig where Xander was Dexter, but this is just as promising. Let's face it: Xander is kind of in need of a consistent moral compass. This experience will be good for him. Probably.

Ah...while this is, um, glossing over the BUD/S traning (i.e not saying how it helped, affected the girls) but something is...glaringly missing and I'm not sure if it's there story here or meant to go to its counterpart. I speak of Hathor. It's been months since the Initative was shut down as a experimental testing ground for Walsh. Also, you've neglected the young slayer who killed her Watcher. You've just...well, dropped that story like a bad habit.

Also, I'm going t guess Sam will likely resign from USAF to head into R&D when she's actively learning at the Furlings science school. My thinking here is she won't have time to be part of SG-1 and attend school. Sure Jack'll look her keen mind but that can change.

That said, while a carrier is a good idea to start but it's kinda useless when said carrier doesn't have fighters. I can't recall if the 302 has been built yet. Also if it's going to be part of a fleet, might consider figates and cruisers cause no carrier is complete without escorts.

I continue to be amazed and whatever you create. Jono got lucky! Fred and Doyle. Wow! If the SGC reslly thinks, their are many potential candidates that could aid the Tokra and firm up their alliance. From the elderly, runaways, retired vets, etc.

I'm thinking Shemp played a mischievous hand in Doyle's arrival in Pylea. Something the PTB haven't picked up on yet. But I suspect once Fred gets out...the moment she meets Xander she's no longer a pawn.

THat said I find it amusing that the PTB have yet to figure out the Asgard is playing a role in helping the Furlings. Cause its the Asgard that's giving them back their lost knowledge and addng Asgard knowledge. Just as funny as it is that the Tok'ra aren't also with a treaty with the Furlings. Seems the PTB is getting cut out of the deal. My thinking is bec most of the negotiations was done on the Asgard ship the PTB don't have a way to look in.

That said the PTB are overlooking one problem with finding Egeria. While it would mean more Tok'ra that is irrelevant if they can't find hosts. And I don't see any Furling volunteering to be a host bec while that would enable Tok'ra to gain the knowledge of both Furling ans Asgard it's still trapped within said Tok'ra. But if that happens it would put said Tok'ra as the most valuable asset bec of the gained knowledge.

Still gotta wonder how the Harmony angle is going to play out.

Oh yea, Doyle being back under the thumb of PTB? Unlikely once he meets Xander it won't happen. Speaking of, when will Whistler report in?

Nice

I really do not like the power that do nothing useful. I mean in cannon they pretty much gave up on winning and are just delaying their own self destruction.

Makes sense form an angle for the parents to act like this.

Nice job with Andrew. How it all pans out will be fun. Love the Sith obsessed goauld. Hawkeye? From MASH?

very good work

...Wow looks like the Slayer Spirit after being casted out of Faith and Buffy returned to demonic origins. Did not see that coming. Nice twist too bad Kennedy is now deceased.