useless why rewrite a story and then not even write the smae among of chapters too

Good so far. Shame you left us with a cliffhanger though. I remember reading your first version of this story and I remember it wasn't bad. Not as bad as you seem to think anyway. Hope for more soon. Cheers.

An interesting beginning, I like Storys with different summons and the ones where he gets the monkey summon are rare. You mixed up the surnames of Homura and Koharu in the beginning.

Naruto should be sasuke.

There's just too much OP shit for sasuke. Two affinities and the Sharingan? Ugh I hate kishimoto for that.

Nice story tho.

update soon

good chapter

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

The Uchiha and the Third Hokage were able to use Shadow release? Right goodbye. This is extremely bad.

Kinda weird that the Monkey Summoning Clan doesn't specialise in Sage Arts. Their leader is a MASSIVE reference to the 'Great Sage, Equal of Heaven' after all.

You should still give him sage mode because sage mode is badass and you can make it however you like since there isn't a monkey sage mode

again with the nerfing of Naruto it's like you want him to be at Sasuke's level no matter what meaning that basically all his training with the Sandaime, Enma, and all the other summons has been nothing more than an absolute waste of time for him. First of all his taijutsu would be stronger than Sasuke's due to who he's been training with an then there's the fact that he's working on element manipulation which would mean he'd have done tree climbing at the very least as I don't see Hiruzen or Enma being so irresponsible as to have Naruto using jutsu without any control training. So if you're going to keep him at the level of Sasuke then I'd suggest you just drop the summons training as they'd make him stronger than Sasuke due to the fact that until now Sasuke hasn't had anybody jonin level to spar with and Enma is jonin level

you're severely nerfing Naruto there's absolutely no fucking way that his taijutsu would be worse than Sasuke's an I don't give a fuck what excuse you use about his style as he's been sparring against ACADEMY STUDENTS and Chunin instructors that are required to go easy on him. Naruto has been sparring and learning from the Sandaime Hokage AND the monkey summons which aren't going to go as easy on him as the academy instructors and are well above the level of the other students so his taijutsu should be way above that of Sasuke just like his ninjutsu is considering Sasuke only has exactly ONE jutsu atm where as Naruto has at LEAST 3 that you've shown plus the Kage Bunshin so yea his level is EVERYTHING should be ahead of Sasuke atm

The details are great... I can't stand reading fics that are bereft of detail and sentence structure. The type of story that is just dialog without any scene setup. You do it well. Thank you.

You should have ended with Naruto asking "7, or 11?"

So... Naruto won't be learning Sennjutsu then? That is a CRIPPLING weakness.

Looking forward to reading more.