Reviews for The Road not Taken
Nargelz chapter 10 . 7/3
I just realised if they moved times in quidditch in 3rf year when Malfoy was injured why didn’t they in 1st year for Harry
MotherBear chapter 1 . 5/12
I’ve taken to buying lottery tickets as there’s an incredible piece of land I desperately want, but cannot afford. If I win... I’m gonna harp at you til you tell me where to send all the best writing equipment... but you gotta finish this story. Ok? Ok!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/2
fucking shit - siblings don't get over their mad just because 1 apologized!

fucking granger - why didn't McG take the time turner away?
Guest chapter 10 . 5/2
fucking granger - what's the reason you gave her a time turner when she does not need it? except to take too many classes - certainly NOT the brain everyone thinks she is if she runs herself ragged just to take more classes than anyone else! STUPID BITCH
Guest chapter 9 . 5/2
you FUCKING let Ron get away without appologizing? what kind of bullshit is that?

and letting Malfoy get away with hurting Harry? everyone caters to the death eaters and just shows that Dumbledork let's them get away with everything! That DOES NOT teach them right from wrong!
Guest chapter 8 . 5/2
Percy and Ron - 2 prats only looking out for themselves!
MotherBear chapter 14 . 5/2
I do not understand why this is marked complete. There is no closure, there’s every indication that the story will continue...

Did you just get bored with this one and quit? I’m very sad if that is the case. I truly enjoy this concept. I hope you have the opportunity and desire to continue this someday.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/29
FECKING granger needs to be obliviated and her magic bound and sent back to the muggle world!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/29
BITCH granger needs knocking upside the head and down the other side!
Bruna da Silva Oliveira chapter 1 . 3/30
Adorei real
SarahOlivier chapter 13 . 3/25
Harry shouldn't have just accepted Hermione's apology
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23
Ho
Tenjo chapter 5 . 3/11
Only two actual issues so far. First, Peter would know that Harry had been with Sirius for the summer and yet he doesn’t even seem as worried in this as he did in canon, just knowing Sirius was on the loose. Second, the amount of opportunities Harry has to stun Peter or put him to sleep is very high and that is literally all that’s needed to pass him to Sirius. Just keep stunning him every five or so minutes, send a letter to Sirius and meet him at the Shrieking Shack. Done. I understand not doing it, since the story would be over... but the fact that it can be done just makes me think the story is being forced.
Tenjo chapter 1 . 3/10
Yes... nothing more flattering than being told that your eyes, the one link to your mother sparkle like fresh, pickled toads. Lovely.
petalssunwards chapter 14 . 2/28
this was great! I liked a different take on Remus! Sirius is brilliant and I love soft hinny
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