| Reviews for Aspect Of Death |
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   R0gueMess1ah chapter 2 . 7/18 Had to stop at chapter 2. Chapter 1 was well written with proper grammar. Chapter 2 had tons of grammar mistakes that I just couldn’t overlook. You HAVE to capitalize the first character of any name. You only capitalized the name when they started a sentence. Drove me up the wall so much that I can’t keep going. Another issue is that you are wanting to mix a bunch of other worlds into one story. That isn’t advisable. It’s best to focus on one or two worlds per story, that way you can build up those characters and story. |
| Wheatley9001 chapter 2 . 2/16 Be honest, did you get the name Komaeda from Danganronpa? |
| Gabrielbrooks chapter 1 . 10/26/2019 It an oc for a reason |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2019 Its hilarious how you made a reference to the first thor movie. |
| TheHeartContainerThief chapter 1 . 7/21/2019 I feel like a rewrite is in order. Bud u let urself run a bit wild with this fanfic. I understand that u had all these great ideas but the problem is a lot of them just don't work. I'll give u props for trying tho. This started out as a very good fic but when u started expanding the harem to unimaginable size it became too much to handle. It's very difficult to make a story work when ur writing for all those characters. Not saying u don't have good ideas. But u tried to mash all those ideas into one fic when they could've worked much better as separate fics. But i really do see potential in this story and, should u decide to rewrite it, all i can say is...it's good to have ideas...but just restrain urself. Sit down and think:"Can I make this work for the WHOLE STORY?" That said i did enjoy reading the story |
| Yurushimo chapter 17 . 7/3/2019 Issei has nothing interesting about him right now. He's just a powerful character who has sex. You should have a weak character stand up against him, who makes Issei go through myriads of emotions and actually makes him grow as a character. A weak character goes against Issei's beliefs and ideals. |
| Yurushimo chapter 1 . 7/3/2019 Marvel Thor? Awesome. |
| TatsuyaShiva4 chapter 12 . 6/25/2019 trash. Nobody is stronger than my boi Great Red! |
| FriggleBerry chapter 12 . 5/10/2019 Really really really wish we got more of the mc and not fluff and other bs we had 20 years of time skip and now we just jump around to characters and it’s killed the story for me |
| pyoson123 chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 Well I was enjoying this story until you started adding people from other anime and shit into his group. |
| William Diaz chapter 32 . 3/21/2019 Can't wait till chapter 33 and 34 |
| Rawrking chapter 8 . 1/24/2019 Shit fic kys harem increasing every chap |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/10/2019 Why do you keep changing valid gender |
| Addvon chapter 1 . 12/19/2018 I want new Chapters PLEASSSSSSSSSSSE! |
| TatsuyaShiva4 chapter 20 . 12/2/2018 Trash List! |
