LOVE HINA!? (VOMITS) I'm sorry but this anime, this f$%king anime m(vomits) this is one of if not the WORST anime franchises of all time. If you like the show that's great, but to me, (vomits).

This is interesting! I can't wait to read more! :D

I feel you ended so quick, isn't it?

Clever plan

For the first time, I liked how Shinobu acted.

WHY YOU HURT MUTSUMI?! SHE HAD ENOUGH, WHY WHY?!

P.S yes i am reviewing the same chapter twice, because i did not find the first two chapters interesting enough, the chapters sounded annoying and insufferable that is my opinion , yet like i said I want mutsumi and keitaro to reach their happy endings and naru gets whats come to her. Good writing,somewhat fine story, and that goes for your others stories. Hope you like this review if you ever read it, thank for your time for writing this story.

I somewhat like this fanfiction, but please can you not make mitsumi go down for murder, she needs a happy ending, along with keitaro, since he too has tried to earn a good ending, and it would suck if he gets screwed over after everything that has happen to him.