I liked this.

DAWWWWWWWWW SO CUUUUTE! I ship this like Amazon Prime ;3 It was SUCH A GOOD STORY! I’m actually rewatching Voltron (for like the 10th time) and I just finished the episode where all the stuff took place. Such good timing, right? Anywho, please, keep writing, you are so good

I love your use of Shiro's given name, and that you addressed Pidge's first kill of Haxus. I'm kinda annoyed that neither seems to be given much thought in either canon or fanon. (And jf I ever get off my lazy butt and actually WRITE some of the ideas I have vs ranting them as theories, you bet that this'll be kne of them!)

Pidge's rant was a bit rough around the edges dialogue-wise, emphasised by your use of bolded words-well placed all-caps can show the same emotion better; as can word-choice and breaking into bits of either attempted interruptions or "camera panning" to give brief snippets of the characters' body language...but that simply comes with practice...which...since I've read the sequel to this first, I'm betting you've already figured that out. Whoops (Considering how I haven't actually posted anything myself, I'm seriously one to talk, huh! xP)

I love this fan-fic very much. the connection between Shiro and Pidge/Katie is adorable. Keep up the hard work and update soon. :)

I think its the perfect length. You're a wonderful author and Shidge is one of my favorite ships! Keep it up!

This is really good!

Love your stories

I hope you don't mind some technical corrections: I think "to lay" should be "to lie". In the long sentence listing Shiro's mistakes, you could just have the word "about" at the beginning and take it out of each individual example. "who" should not follow "two of which". I don't think Shiro saying "But it did [happen]" does anything to make Katie feel better, if that is what he is trying to do. "had tore" should be either "tore" or "had torn". You wrote "when happened" when I think you meant "what happened".

Great story! Just finished it and I have to say I'm really glad you didn't stop at 100 words! I do love your writing style and as far as I'm concerned you don't need to improve it. Really loved this story! Excellent work!

Great little one-shot! :)

That one-shot was really sweet. I liked it a lot, but can't think of anything to critique either.