Thanks~

So i know this is on hiatus, how i didnt find this before i have no clue... i love medic naruto fics... but i wanted to give some feedback. The way he got into medical ninjutsu is awesome. The soldier pills was a little hard to believe. There is clearly a shortage of medical nins, i would have liked to see that shown in the story a little more than it was... partially because it makes more sense on why naruto would be healing so many people in the invasion. The relationship between Sasuke, Naruto, and Sakura is interesting, and it feels like ur trying to ween sakura off sasuke by showing his flaws, like loving the devil fruit itself.

The date... well... the skating ring is weird. I cant imagine that kind of infrastructure in a combat village. Its just too advanced technology wise for the current time of Naruto. If it was a seasonal, oh the lake is frozen cause its cold time... that makes sense. So the date location... is kinda out of place.

Also the reaction of the Nara family... seems a little off. Im not sure how excited they would be. Sakura, Sasuke and Kakashi seem right up the alley... but Shikaku is also a clan leader here right? One of his main things would be safety and continuation of his clan. Aka an heir. Im not saying he should instantly hate Naruto and Shikamaru... but well there should be some sort of tension here. Now His wife... would definitely be more interested because A, she isnt the clan leader, she doesnt have to worry as much, and b she would probably love a more energetic person in the family.

But... i really am enjoying these first 17 chapters. Your naruto's spiels are adorable and expected of someone who takes the health of others around him seriously. The third Hokage being so supportive is also great. Curious to see how Jiraiya will take it. Gonna finish up reading but thanks for writing this!

Bien, estoy escribiendo esto en español porque estoy segura de que mi entendimiento sobre el idioma inglés no es suficiente para redactar mi mensaje adecuadamente. Espero que, aún así, mi mensaje pueda llegarte.

Comprendo un poco por lo que pasas. Yo misma soy escritora de fanfiction. Y al parecer nacimos alrededor del mismo año porque al igual que tu cumplí mis 18 años en el 2019. Soy un poco mayor por unos meses, pero conozco un poco cómo al crecer va aumentando las responsabilidades que cargamos. Hoy en día no escribo casi nada, aunque no me he rendido con mis historias. Afortunada o desafortunadamente no me he encontrado haters para con mis historias y recibido apoyo incluso si he dejado grandes brechas entre mis actualizaciones. Aunque tampoco me han faltado mis pizcas de problemas familiares, crisis existenciales, depresiones y agotadoras cargas de trabajo de la universidad.

Entiendo que la vida cambia y nosotros cambiamos con esta. Lamento que hayas perdido la motivación y alegría por esta historia. Me entristece tu partida porque amé completamente tu historia y tu escritura. Incluso creo que las acciones de Sakura en los capítulos que borraste fueron adecuadas. Esperaba una continuación, y tal vez mi corazón siga esperándola algunos años antes de que acepte la idea.

Solo puedo desearte la mejor de las suertes en tu vida. Realmente espero que consigas cumplir todas tus metas y que algún día pueda yo disfrutar una vez más de tu maravillosa redacción.

Con amor, una lectora más del fondo.

[Si algún día necesitas un oído aunque sea solo para despotricar, no dudes en enviar un mensaje].

Hello again, so yeah, this is the continuation of the review earlier, I have no idea that you were young in having created this, I mean, not all have this kind of passion, drive and talent to write something of this level, and the fact that you have goals to have a better adult life, I am so proud of u. I hope that u are well in regards to depression, I'm not really the best person to talk to regarding that, but I hope i can share just somewhat of that burden, just to have a person to talk to you know, (though I may be late in replying may not give really useful advice etc., Cause i am just good at listening and reading)and if not then i hope that i helped you in someway even by just giving (very few) reviews. Though we do strongly wish for your return, that is up to you, do what makes you happy. Again best wishes to you and stay safe.

Really disappointed to see you go, the story was one I always kept a side eye on but with the slow updates I found myself drifting away from unintentionally.

I hope you find what you’re looking for in life, and while you never finished your story I respect that you went out of the way to post up everything you had left before that point.

Be well.

There's a part of me that is sad about you leaving but the other part is happy that you are making decisions that make you happy. There is no need for us to really complain because after all your works are your own and you shared it with us readers. The fact that you are still posting the deleted chapters (I've read them and they were so beautifully heartaching pieces) makes me really grateful to you, because not all of them do that, you are giving us some kind of closure to your works. Another thing to be grateful is that you don't intend to delete this wonderful fic( im reallly reaaaallly grateful for that.)
I may have been late in having found this fic, and Im sorry that Im not such a reviewer and did not give much comments, but i am really really happy and grateful to have found this fic, read it repeatedly(even those of the deleted chappies) and somewhat included in the ride in this fic's journey even though im just a reallly really small part in it as just a reader.

I'm also glad you are making your own book, and knowing somewhat of your writing style and plots, i know it will be great, hope i can luckily find and read it someday. I have a lot to say but I think this is the gist of it. So thank you again for all that you've done and that you are still posting those lovely deleted chappies. It has been a great time having been part (reading in our case) of The Great Medic journey with you. Thank you so much. I wish for your happiness and safety, specially in this time of epidemic.

I don't know if your planning on continuing this, but it is amazing! One of my favourite Naruto fics by far, I look forward to it's updates whenever they come through and I hope that you stick with it!

Thank you for all your hard work and efforts up to this point. I greatly appreciate that you let us know that you would be leaving. I will greatly miss your works but I 110% understand where you are coming from. I wish you much luck, love, and happiness in your future and future endeavors!

Lots of Love,
lvdmadeon

I just wanted to say that i had no idea you were so young when you started writing. I think you've done a great job here, writing about serious topics and making believable changes to the canon storyline to fit your fanfiction, and your grammar/ punctuation is very good as well. I personally much prefer Archive of our Own for a platform for reading and writing, for a lot of reasons, ffnet wouldn't accept my Google doc but AO3 did, etc. I really enjoyed reading this particular work of yours and I hope you someday do come back to writing, but it's ok if you never do. I'm sorry that your senior year has turned out so rough but i hope that you are happy, healthy, and safe. If you need someone to talk to, look up my account here or on AO3. I've struggled with feelings of depression and anxiety since I was 12, so I understand and am here if you need someone.
I'm looking forward to catching up on your writing now, while I'm procrastinating getting ready for work.
Lol if i never hear from you again, I hope you have an awesome adulthood. Be patient, don't let the bad get you down, find something you love and stick with it, and keep in touch with true friends. Best thing in life for being happy

Quit with the hiatus updates they're annoying

Thanks for letting us know :)

aww while i’m sad this will not be continued i’m happy that you feel happy and will be stopping writing because it’s something you want to do have a good life ! and stay safe during quarantine ! :))

Its okay. Stay safe! Are you better now?

No who broke into Narutos house! Please say they were caught! This means Naruto needs to buy a house (with his ANBU fund maybe) and get too of the line security added, be taught seals, or be even one of his family members houses.

Chakra Storage Seals, maybe? On an average day Naruto probably doesn't even use half of his chakra. Plus higher Chakra Control Exercises? Like super high...

Also maybe a different summons for him? Not Toads, Slugs, or Snakes. Maybe Kitsune, Neko/Tiger, or Inu/Wolf?

I can't wait to read the next chapter! Very well written, I hope it doesn't stay on Hiatus very long.