Please continue this is a great start love the story

Great story. I love it!

Is there like a second part?

Is there more to this story - it seems unfinished. I would love to read more of this story, please update soon!

Creativity fail here. Events play out *totally differently* than the start of the first film, but:

A) Hiccup still finds Toothless.
B) Toothless is somehow still missing his tailfin (should still be intact if not shot down by Hiccup).
C) Hiccup is still missing his left leg.

If you're going to make major changes to a story, then *account* for those changes and don't just mindlessly ape the films.

wait what? why didn't Valka reveal herself to stoick?

I really hope Astrid realizes how much of an idiot she is being REALLY soon...

I'll system this. Amazing but Astrid is acting stupid to not listen.

Love the story so far, keep it up. I like how you write Stoik and Valka. :)

excited that u posted a new chapter. I am pyched to read the next one.

Awesome, funny chapter. Thank you.

Oh boy. I hope Astrid and Hiccup can come up with something! Amazing story by the way!

Well, this is pretty interesting. I hope they all can work things out. Please continue.

Awesome story please update soon! :)