Reviews for The Marvels
Guest chapter 6 . 8/7
I would like to see 2 things harry and carol in the bathroom situation and them having a threesome with luna
Robert77833 chapter 6 . 3/13
Just re-read this - a shame you didn't write any of the requests...
Sara chapter 6 . 9/17/2019
Even if you don't want to continue this story in as epic a way as it seemed to be going (the mysterious bad guy and all that) you could write that bad guy out as the bonding of Harry/Carol triggers something that causes him to die or something like that, and get on with the light-hearted and smutty parts of the story.
reaperofages chapter 6 . 7/27/2019
would be interesting to see the harry/carol and then harry/carol/daughter
HarryxDaphne chapter 1 . 6/27/2019
As of right now 666 people have Favorited this fic. This is the devil's fic people!
Guest chapter 6 . 6/11/2019
It would be nice to see that idea on Harry/Carol and Harry/Their Daughter, actually
Time Emperor chapter 6 . 6/6/2019
The only thing I hate about this story is that Harry is friends with Ron. That little bastard should have died at Harry's hands the first time they met.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/19/2019
I wish youd continue this fic and the idea of harry fucking Carol and their daughters is hot
AaronD1 chapter 6 . 5/14/2019
Well shit. That was a nice build up to nothing.
Mayor Hawkeye chapter 6 . 1/9/2019
Can you do a lemon chapter with Harry/Carol and then one with Harry/Carol/daughter(s).
ss43 chapter 6 . 10/29/2018
update it
SwanGod chapter 1 . 8/8/2018
Update!
Olaf74 chapter 6 . 5/8/2018
Please continue it!
flashversespeedster chapter 6 . 3/19/2018
I love this story but there was one huggeeeee freaking problem for me lol Ron weasley the phoenix force really I mean really Ron is 3rd party character not a star but good job on the story anyway wish you would update it
Prodigal Knight chapter 6 . 2/25/2018
I could totally go for a chapter of Harry/Carol and later their daughter.
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