| Reviews for Don't Let Me Go |
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chrisloveschoco1ate chapter 3 . 5/14/2018 I am officially in-love with this fic. |
shadesofmidnightsun chapter 1 . 7/30/2016 This looks promising. I like the stubbornness and the snark and Salazar in general. What I'd love to know, though, is Salazar's approximate age: I'd guess from his reactions he's a child, but it would be nice to know. You also do the pronoun game a bit too much for my taste. I see nothing wrong with writing *he* instead of a name, and it generally works, but in this case, if I'm not mistaken, you refer to two people the same way, which makes it somewhat confusing and diminishes the effect using the pronouns could have. |
Guess chapter 1 . 7/25/2016 Oh, that looks promising. . . I love how Salazar stays snarky and defiant despite the situation, it suits the character. I look forward to reading more! Love xx |