at the end is a clasic line as long as we have each other it will be fine, but it still works for this.

Your writing has really improved since "Bonds of Alchemy." I enjoyed this story greatly.

Loved it XD
Sad it's ending but it was wonderful while it lasted XD
XD
Can't wait for more from you XD

Thank you so much for updating! I look forward to the next story, and don't worry about taking a long time to update:)

Love this story! I'm really looking forward to reading the last chapter! Thanks for writing this heart-wrenching short story!

Oh no! Roy don't you dare die! And also I hope your house gets fixed soon. I will be praying for you. :)

Ed called Roy DAD! XD
Did Ray leave some kind of booby trap behind? I wonder what happens next. Looking forward to more! XD

OOOH that was good!

GAAAAAAH! DA CLIFFY! That's my tactic... T

Roy!
No!
Don't die! You can't die!
DX
Can't wait for an update XD
Excited XD
How's it gonna end! XD

Interesting except the fact that it's almost impossible to tie someone and position the gun that way and actually have their fingers pull the trigger with a thread? I mean obviously said person would manage holding his finger firmly, said person I'd Roy in our case but it was a pretty thrilling and extremely exciting!
Can't wait for the next chapter, you sure enjoy these cliff hangers don't you? XD
Literally all the your chapters are, you want us to suffer, don't ya ? *jabs an accusing finger at you* XD
Anyways nice job and good luck ;) ~ DarkFlameFantasy

NO STOP WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME

Noooooooo! Cliffhanger!

XD Thank you for doing this to us.

No please not a cliffhanger! ( I reviewed yesterday but it didn't show up)