I can't view your latest story! It says it has no chapters! I'm sure it's great though.

Peter is so good hearted and kind. It makes me so sad that he feels so unloveable at times. I hope Erik wakes up soon and starts helping to fix that.

Another amazing story! You portray the relationship between these two so well and Peter was perfectly in character (hard to tell with Erik what with him being unconcious and all). It's nice to read something that just shows thoughts like this without a constant need for action- clearly you are a master of many genres!

ahhh yes! such an intriguing idea and i just love how you write peter and his headspace! can't wait to see where this goes and am looking forward to erik's reaction. :)

This is so sad and really well written!

I want to give Peter a hug. He's so kind but insecure too.

Awwww... Someone give Peter some cuddles!

Sad moment but so true to the characters. It makes sense that Peter would be hesitant to tell Erik after Erik is so recently bereaved but Peter's insecurity would also feed into that. He'd doubt that Erik would want to know. I'm glad he does tell him.

I can't wait for the next chapter..

Peter and Erik feels are always going to make me happy.

Awwwww... Poor Peter. It must have hurt so much not knowing the right thing to do. Erik I'm sure will be happy to have family again. I'm actually a little sad that we won't see Erik's reaction.