Reviews for Grey
AlienfromNorth chapter 5 . 12/17/2018
I mean, it is good. But man is it fast pased, I don't understand a lot of it. You leave a lot out, maybe you need a beta. No flame nor hate, it is well written. But you so many gaps left untouched.
Lyryenn chapter 14 . 12/7/2018
I so want to see when Edward realizes that he lost his mate. this will be glorious.
guest chapter 13 . 11/14/2018
That's horrible the force her to marry, how to look and to kill
Guest chapter 11 . 11/1/2018
Can bella and edward not get a happy ending? Edward was a piece of shit he doesnt deserve happiness
Lyryenn chapter 19 . 9/2/2018
I love Dem. and I can't wait for Edward see he's mistake. Dem is the best Mate ever!
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 14 . 9/12/2016
omg:) plis more
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 13 . 8/22/2016
Omg this is so good. I hope you update really soon.
Nikole596 chapter 13 . 8/21/2016
Soz cn u pls repost the last chapter all the code is still in it
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 12 . 8/10/2016
wow:) I like it:) plis more
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 11 . 8/8/2016
Amazing! Simply amazing! I love your writing and i love this story! I can't wait to read update soon! :)
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 8 . 8/2/2016
omg! noo whay plis bella love Demetrii:)
Booklover345 chapter 8 . 8/1/2016
If she's his mate, how can he date Bella? Seems wrong. Very very wrong.
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 7 . 7/31/2016
OMG :) I love it soooooo much that section- story !Amazing! Simply amazing! I love your writing and i love this story! I can't wait to read update soon! :)
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 5 . 7/26/2016
Amazing! Simply amazing! I love your writing and i love this story! I can't wait to read update soon! :)