Reviews for Grey |
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AlienfromNorth chapter 5 . 12/17/2018 I mean, it is good. But man is it fast pased, I don't understand a lot of it. You leave a lot out, maybe you need a beta. No flame nor hate, it is well written. But you so many gaps left untouched. |
Lyryenn chapter 14 . 12/7/2018 I so want to see when Edward realizes that he lost his mate. this will be glorious. |
guest chapter 13 . 11/14/2018 That's horrible the force her to marry, how to look and to kill |
Guest chapter 11 . 11/1/2018 Can bella and edward not get a happy ending? Edward was a piece of shit he doesnt deserve happiness |
Lyryenn chapter 19 . 9/2/2018 I love Dem. and I can't wait for Edward see he's mistake. Dem is the best Mate ever! |
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 14 . 9/12/2016 omg:) plis more |
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 13 . 8/22/2016 Omg this is so good. I hope you update really soon. |
Nikole596 chapter 13 . 8/21/2016 Soz cn u pls repost the last chapter all the code is still in it |
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 12 . 8/10/2016 wow:) I like it:) plis more |
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 11 . 8/8/2016 Amazing! Simply amazing! I love your writing and i love this story! I can't wait to read update soon! :) |
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 8 . 8/2/2016 omg! noo whay plis bella love Demetrii:) |
Booklover345 chapter 8 . 8/1/2016 If she's his mate, how can he date Bella? Seems wrong. Very very wrong. |
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 7 . 7/31/2016 OMG :) I love it soooooo much that section- story !Amazing! Simply amazing! I love your writing and i love this story! I can't wait to read update soon! :) |
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 5 . 7/26/2016 Amazing! Simply amazing! I love your writing and i love this story! I can't wait to read update soon! :) |