| Reviews for Naruto Founder of the Grey Order |
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bayoujmd89 chapter 10 . 6/2 Patiently wait for an update keep up the good work Ask for Hinata I think she would make a good sister figure for Naruto but that's my own option I hope to see you another update soon but do take my option into consideration if you please other than that keep up the good work |
Infernius chapter 10 . 4/24 So little piece of advice. Don't put wookke language or write the translation just after the sentence not at the end of the chapter it either broke the flow of the story if you go look or you don't understand a bit of story. Otherwise still a really good chapter, the Chunnin exam are going to be...interesting. |
david.teague.3950 chapter 7 . 4/23 Really you're adding a Wookie to a Harem? I'm sorry but that's just far too much hair for my tastes. But you're the author, all I ask is that if there're any Lemons with Mallawar, that you warn us readers first. |
david.teague.3950 chapter 6 . 4/23 Wookie's I hate their dialect, much rather have Twi'leks and Togruta's near me, plus I do love HK's mode of speak it's always a breath of fresh air to hear him. |
DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 9 . 4/22 Update |
DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 10 . 4/22 update |
dheathking4821 chapter 10 . 3/24 Please continue |
tiger9868 chapter 10 . 3/19 please update |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/27 carry this on it is good |
jtscores chapter 10 . 2/13 Yeet |
Samthman chapter 10 . 1/28 This is a good story please keep up the good work |
thunderofdeath97 chapter 1 . 1/16 Hes pretty small and underweight if hes 16 and only weighs 88 pounds |
ElementalMaster16 chapter 10 . 1/13 Fun Chapter! I had a good time re-reading this story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_) and a belated happy new year to you! |
ps2boy.zachary chapter 10 . 1/10 nice work on all chapters out so far and looking forward to the next chapter |
Primarx chapter 10 . 1/10 great story. would nice if u put wookie translation right below the text as it's inconvenient to scroll down every time |