Ahhh this is fantastic! Everything’s woven so well together and your humor and smart writing are always on point! Hope you continue it sometime!

This is such a great work. The journey of unraveling each character's depth and Nao's reaction and interaction with them was the thing that I loved the most.

I -absolutely- LOVED this

ahhhhhhh i screech

You don't know how grateful I am that you decided so long ago to continue the story, I literally started and I couldn't stop reading. I didn't care that I had to get up in a few hours or that I was sleepy all day. I do not regret reading, that power to get excited and intriguing is just a few phrases, characters, interactions and situations I think I enjoy every part of this adventure that I could read and I know that I will have to reread with less speed but with The same emotion. Thank you very much for sharing this bit of imagination. You have made me very happy

This is such a brilliant fic! Thank you for writing this. I love all the character interractions and the ways story changes unexpectedly. I can't wait to see where Nao's story will eventually lead.

Love the story, only question is how much older is she then Law and Ace?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Stamp of approval for that intro , loved it.

So glad I stumbled upon this fic!

Please update~~~

She is such a little brat and I love it.

Oh wow I think the first time I read this there were only around three chapters? I clicked on this story with a vague sense of familiarity and after rereading the prologue, I’m really excited to get back into it :)

Also with regards to the person who commented below complaining about Japanese suffixes etc, I think you should just write the story how you want because this fanfic is based off characters in a Japanese anime, meaning the fans who are reading this fic are already at least somewhat familiar with the terms. In addition, Japanese culture does in fact play a role in the one piece world, so it would feel a bit incomplete without them? Idk though, that’s just my opinion. You do you lol

Oh wow I think the first time I read this was when there were only three or so chapters. I clicked on this story with a vague sense of familiarity and after rereading the prologue I’m really excited to get back into it :)

STOP useing suffix on name name

STOP useing JAPAN words
It make it 10000000000% hard to Read

Rosinante and Nao's relationship is funny, the age difference is large yet he still treats like a close friend, I love that. And we're seeing Law!