I like this one I hope you do more by adding to it... I love to see how it turns out...

Of course if Dumbledore allowed the Dursleys to be killed by Death Eaters then Harry would never trust him again, knowing that lives were disposable to him. When Dumbledore came to him and tried to guilt him into coming back into his fold Harry would certainly know that Dumbledore knew when the wards fell and did not try to save the Dursleys for that very purpose. Harry would know he had two dark lords to defeat.

A neat twist on Fanon's objections to the second task.

TGM

This has the inklings of a great story though Mo-Ron and Bumbles are a bit 2-dimensional.

I do hope that the Dumbleodre's plans comes to ruin. Will Harry get firm control over his family's estate and of his godfather? I"m sure that the Dursleys will get their just rewards.

I never did understand how one date made Hermione the thing Krum would miss the most. It would have made more sense if he'd had a friend from school or even a sibling like Fleur.
Don't even get me started on choosing Ron over Hermione for Harry.
Nice little piece.

What about Neville?

Oh man not good. It is a great chapter and I looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Harry and Hermione rip this person a new one.

Seems Draco is the most logical one to be the rapist followed by Ron IF he was hiding his jealousy! BUT there are still enough former DE's and their offspring around to do this. I was NOT happy with Luna being the next one, Ginny or some one else could have been used while having Luna as a alter victim might have build the suspense more.

dennisud

I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE OF THIS!

Harsh.
Can't decide if its Ron or Draco.
Hope they'll be another part showing the outcome.

This is a good start to a strange mystery story so keep it going. I would say investigate the Slytherin boys. Is Draco at school still.

not bad but at the same time horrible

Goes to show you should be careful what you wish for.
Good one.

Of course, Harry needs to tell Hermione everything because the two of them pissed, on a mission, and with a plan is a thing of beauty.