Reviews for The Hybrid Shinobi |
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Awesome chapter 9 . 8/23 Good one , because ninja's don't have feelings especially the hokage |
Guest chapter 23 . 10/28/2019 Doing Instant Transmission does not mean anything if he cannot pick up a a Large Enough Ki signature... and it is pointless if he is in another universe.. you never established if Naruto verse is in another universe or simply on another planet in this fic? |
Guest chapter 23 . 10/28/2019 Not many people are smarter than understand that Gohan and could easily surpress his power level.. Therefore Gohan Being Nerfed is Bad Writing |
Elchico 64 chapter 23 . 10/29/2019 It's a good story that you are putting together, it has to develop further and deepen, but that comes with practice and effort. I hope you keep writing because at the moment it is going very well. |
Statess chapter 23 . 10/24/2019 KEEP THIS STORY GOING IT IS GREAT :) (I still wish that gohan was shown thinking to himself that everyone is so weak you know lol but he will still keep his god powers all the way down to the levels he are at now :) STILL LOVE IT! keep it going :) |
reaver216 chapter 23 . 10/22/2019 Great chapter, but there was this one spot when Gohan was fighting someone before Orochimaru that you called his opponent by two different villages. Other than that I didn't notice anything else wrong with it |
Guest chapter 22 . 10/11/2019 Thank you so much for not stoping this story it is amazing! I love op gohan and his effect on the naruto world ! (Nothing could beat gohan nothing at all ) :) |
prbenjamin chapter 22 . 10/10/2019 good job mate |
anon chapter 22 . 10/10/2019 Never Stop Giving Up and Keep Going I like this story as well please keep going. |
Pino the Saiyan chapter 22 . 10/10/2019 Pleased don't delete this Story. IT IS My Favorite |
Statess chapter 21 . 8/26/2019 "gohan" (if he actually try's for once against the people of this world) He would obliterate everyone and cant be beaten(but he stays behind and will only interfere if something really bad is happening, or just to help his team find the enemy.) also cant be sneaked up on)(he just needs to flick his finger in any direction where the enemy is and they are defeated because of the blast wave(like from one punch man when the guy with 2 metal arms doges death(everything is disintegrated)(that is if he really is going to attack(or even a so much more restraint when hitting someone with his finger lol (also 100000 times faster then light in base mode 0..0) I really hope for god power gohan :P |
Kage-kitsune9001 chapter 21 . 8/25/2019 Lets see how the sound try to handle Gohan, and learn just how far out of their league Gohan is to them. |
Guest chapter 20 . 6/22/2019 You Should Gocus more on Fixing This Story then Lemon scenes |
Guest chapter 17 . 6/22/2019 Okay this story is clearly rushed and it is poorly written because you are nerfing Dragon Ball characters and Gohan Out of Chracter |
Guest chapter 20 . 6/22/2019 Reality of Dragonball Chracters in Narutoverse: Reality: Dragonball Chracters will Try to find way to get back home.. If they can not they simply Settle.. But remain mostly in chracter Gohan: Will Try to Fit in and Probably travel. But Will Never Agree to A Shinobi.. He will Likely Settle in a Peaceful Village Goku: Is To much of Free Spirit to Listen and will travel around the world Vegeta: HA HA HA HA! Characters like Gohan, Krillen. Future Trinks. Goten, Pan,Yamcha, Tien, Chauizou, Yajirobe, Uub what have a better time fitting in the Narutovesrse then Goku and Vegeta..but they would not like the Shinobi System.. Unless They are put in Boruto Era where time is more peaceful |