| Reviews for An Unlucky Draw |
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Guest chapter 12 . 7/13 Shame this is dead. |
Mystik Owl chapter 12 . 5/20 IDK if you’re still looking for another beta reader, but I’d be happy to beta read for you. I mean, if you ever read this... |
GRASHROS chapter 12 . 9/21/2019 Here, I want to know what you can write with these: ~Our War that Ends the World, or Perhaps the Crusade that Starts it Anew ~Naze Boku no Sekai wo Daremo Oboeteinai no ka? ~Beastars |
sugoijack9 chapter 11 . 7/15/2019 Mercury is way over his head, thinking he could fight against Minato. |
sugoijack9 chapter 9 . 7/15/2019 Schnee are idiots. Who say they're the only ones in Remnant capable of summoning in the first place? Dofus family... |
PieKnight chapter 12 . 6/28/2019 Great story! I hope you continue it someday. |
fire chapter 12 . 4/6/2019 good chapter! |
Bolis67 chapter 10 . 2/26/2019 It was pretty smart to disguise his relationship with roman but explaining your powers to a STRANGER is pretty fucking stupid. Did they EARNED his trust? Do they even KNOW him? NO Youve made a stupid mistake and i am not gonna read it anymore. You can tell but put it in a CRPYTIC way or like what he did to describe his relationship to roman DISGUISING words. |
Suzululu4moe chapter 12 . 2/22/2019 Cinderella |
Suzululu4moe chapter 10 . 2/22/2019 Haha roomies. Nice development. |
Suzululu4moe chapter 7 . 2/22/2019 Lol what he said to weiss |
Suzululu4moe chapter 6 . 2/22/2019 Nice Roman. |
Suzululu4moe chapter 5 . 2/22/2019 Good thing he doesn’t sleep in his underpants only. |
Suzululu4moe chapter 4 . 2/22/2019 Good thing he did t summon Mara . |
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 2/22/2019 Interesting customers |