Reviews for An Unlucky Draw
Guest chapter 12 . 7/13
Shame this is dead.
Mystik Owl chapter 12 . 5/20
IDK if you’re still looking for another beta reader, but I’d be happy to beta read for you. I mean, if you ever read this...
GRASHROS chapter 12 . 9/21/2019
Here, I want to know what you can write with these:
~Our War that Ends the World, or Perhaps the Crusade that Starts it Anew
~Naze Boku no Sekai wo Daremo Oboeteinai no ka?
~Beastars
sugoijack9 chapter 11 . 7/15/2019
Mercury is way over his head, thinking he could fight against Minato.
sugoijack9 chapter 9 . 7/15/2019
Schnee are idiots. Who say they're the only ones in Remnant capable of summoning in the first place? Dofus family...
PieKnight chapter 12 . 6/28/2019
Great story! I hope you continue it someday.
fire chapter 12 . 4/6/2019
good chapter!
Bolis67 chapter 10 . 2/26/2019
It was pretty smart to disguise his relationship with roman but explaining your powers to a STRANGER is pretty fucking stupid.

Did they EARNED his trust? Do they even KNOW him? NO
Youve made a stupid mistake and i am not gonna read it anymore.

You can tell but put it in a CRPYTIC way or like what he did to describe his relationship to roman DISGUISING words.
Suzululu4moe chapter 12 . 2/22/2019
Cinderella
Suzululu4moe chapter 10 . 2/22/2019
Haha roomies. Nice development.
Suzululu4moe chapter 7 . 2/22/2019
Lol what he said to weiss
Suzululu4moe chapter 6 . 2/22/2019
Nice Roman.
Suzululu4moe chapter 5 . 2/22/2019
Good thing he doesn’t sleep in his underpants only.
Suzululu4moe chapter 4 . 2/22/2019
Good thing he did t summon Mara .
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 2/22/2019
Interesting customers
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