Reviews for The Silent Bystander
Jcassie chapter 1 . 2/13
hmm dont really understand a bit of it. but good story. hope you update
angela340278 chapter 6 . 9/15/2018
Fascinating.
I hope you continue to write.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/30/2017
Good update
Silvermane1 chapter 6 . 5/1/2017
Fantastic update
huskielover94 chapter 6 . 5/1/2017
this is great... cant wait for more
Pri-Chan 1410 chapter 6 . 4/29/2017
I cant wait to see more of Harry! Great chapter as always!
C.M.Alm chapter 1 . 4/29/2017
interesting take on the concept! I look forward to more :)
YokaiAngel chapter 6 . 4/28/2017
Wao!~~ Awesome~
R. A Cross chapter 6 . 4/28/2017
Aww...poor loki
animeromance1972 chapter 6 . 4/28/2017
Oh Loki, you make me cry!
DarkRavie chapter 6 . 4/28/2017
Another great chapter. You are doing great with this story. It's a fabulous read and I can't wait to read what happens next.
Roserayrose chapter 5 . 3/29/2017
very confusing format
tigergirl1723 chapter 5 . 1/23/2017
This is interesting and I hope that you update this soon.
huskielover94 chapter 5 . 12/30/2016
this is great... cant wait for more
Guest chapter 5 . 12/14/2016
This was a shit chapter.
Maybe in your hurry to post something you made this shit but I suggest to tke your time and truly work on it. Non of this dialog driven shit, this looks like the script for a play instead of a story.
Your jumping and announcing of POV is also a major shitty decision that uktimately is lazy and will drive people away and critice youmfor it, like I am.

Fucking shit Im not log in dammit
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