| Reviews for The Silent Bystander |
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Jcassie chapter 1 . 2/13 hmm dont really understand a bit of it. but good story. hope you update |
angela340278 chapter 6 . 9/15/2018 Fascinating. I hope you continue to write. |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/30/2017 Good update |
Silvermane1 chapter 6 . 5/1/2017 Fantastic update |
huskielover94 chapter 6 . 5/1/2017 this is great... cant wait for more |
Pri-Chan 1410 chapter 6 . 4/29/2017 I cant wait to see more of Harry! Great chapter as always! |
C.M.Alm chapter 1 . 4/29/2017 interesting take on the concept! I look forward to more :) |
YokaiAngel chapter 6 . 4/28/2017 Wao!~~ Awesome~ |
R. A Cross chapter 6 . 4/28/2017 Aww...poor loki |
animeromance1972 chapter 6 . 4/28/2017 Oh Loki, you make me cry! |
DarkRavie chapter 6 . 4/28/2017 Another great chapter. You are doing great with this story. It's a fabulous read and I can't wait to read what happens next. |
Roserayrose chapter 5 . 3/29/2017 very confusing format |
tigergirl1723 chapter 5 . 1/23/2017 This is interesting and I hope that you update this soon. |
huskielover94 chapter 5 . 12/30/2016 this is great... cant wait for more |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/14/2016 This was a shit chapter. Maybe in your hurry to post something you made this shit but I suggest to tke your time and truly work on it. Non of this dialog driven shit, this looks like the script for a play instead of a story. Your jumping and announcing of POV is also a major shitty decision that uktimately is lazy and will drive people away and critice youmfor it, like I am. Fucking shit Im not log in dammit |