| Reviews for A Demon in Disguise |
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   Elizabeth loines chapter 11 . 5/18 Please update |
| Naniu2002 chapter 11 . 8/24/2019 Updateeee pleaseeee |
| Naniu2002 chapter 9 . 8/24/2019 Mmmm, you could dye all hers cloths in Black and Blood red |
| Jose19 chapter 2 . 8/1/2018 I am surprised that the Yuki-onna is going to let him so easily after she loves him a great deal, and also about his friends as well. |
| Jose19 chapter 1 . 8/1/2018 This will be interesting but I will say Rikuo might be over his head because these so called Humans have powers that can kill Rikuo and even his friends. |
| Soccerlover17 chapter 11 . 6/16/2018 Update please! |
| anielsen33326 chapter 11 . 5/25/2018 been over a year and its fun. You gonna continue with this or what? |
| just yuki chapter 11 . 4/15/2018 Tamazuki as in reformed villain, villain hidden in plain sight or before shikoku arc? |
| just yuki chapter 8 . 4/15/2018 I just wanted to say that if I am in the professors position, I would probably think that Rikuo and the Dementor show are rigged. Hell, I am somehow want to say this is rigged right now, and I have reading it from Rikuo's thought and from his POV... |
| just yuki chapter 5 . 4/15/2018 Cussing Dumbledore, how... Bizarro... |
| just yuki chapter 4 . 4/15/2018 Okay, I am confused with Dumbledore doesn't immediately supicious about Rikuo changing form. Or to be more specific, he is not supicious enough. When Yoru changing to Rikuo he is immediately appeased with that proof and not thinking like "oh wait, maybe he is metamorphmagus?" And asking more questions that only original Rikuo know. The second is the yokai seems to relaxed to me for sleeping in foreign place where they don't know all the occupants. Did they sleep lightly or did they just sleeping and still aware of everyone within some radius? For a bodyguard, Kurotabou looks to relaxed to me, or maybe they are confident in their skill... |
| just yuki chapter 3 . 4/15/2018 Totally sorry and not sorry at the same time for all the questions, but how they can speak and comprehended English fluently (from what I gather in the interaction in this chapter, no struggling, no suttering)? |
| just yuki chapter 2 . 4/15/2018 It's okay, but I am a bit confused with some of the things. First, why Rikuo just have Kurotabou with him? I mean, they will completely going to uncharted territory, far far away from their country, and their only source information is an old man that they never meet or known his reputation before. At least five bodyguard is respectable number, 2 four scouting information and their surroundings and two for shadowing Rikuo and Kuro. Rikuo is strong, but not unkillable. Why he is not supicious that Dumbledore can be lying or preparing trap? Where the precautions? |
| just yuki chapter 1 . 4/14/2018 The first scene seems good, have nice pace and all, but then towards the end it seemed... rushed? And then where his bodyguard, Tsurara, Aotobe and the other? They are afterall protective with their master... Anyway, it's good start and overall nice chapter for the first in the fic |
| VOADOROGyabi chapter 11 . 3/15/2018 ITS AWESOME PLEASE UPDATE THIS |
