This is what a good story is

I just realized that you made a sequel!
And as always the turmoil of emotion is great, woah.
It's really deep, especially the kids with disney hats... . :,(
I don't know why but reading an accident when people can't do anything to fight nature always made me want to cry.. And you just accomplished that. Period

I have been reading your stories for years. I just love them. You have real talent. Thanks for sharing.

You never disappoint ! Always clear, always clean, always interesting, always in character. You have Richard's point of view perfectly. And it is always great to see the same story from another perspective. I also love his guilt here. That is so like him. He has survivor's guilt, of course , throughout his life. Naturally. That guilt is covered by youth, by jokes, by friendships, but it is still beneath the surface. You caught it, too. Thanks for writing!

Hola.
Me encantó como lo manejaste, existe cierta tristeza al pensar que tanto podría arrepentirse de una acción. ahora a leer el anterior.
Gracias por la historia.

Great story. Thanks.

This is so great and so heartbreaking at the same time!

Shit.
Well, huh. Bad news spreads like a virus, good like the vaccine: often too little, too late, and not everybody receives it. He's going to be fighting off death rumors for years. And this is why that lovely little 'call when you get there' or when you change plans thing is important. It's not being paranoid, it's being family.
Keep up the good work, dark