nice fanfic

This was adorable!

Alright, read the story a few times, loved it, and i finally decided to review. Look, im going to be honest with you, your fic is not perfect...

But its pretty damn good though.

Even though there were certain things that i didnt like, ex: Reaper came off a bit too casual, 76 "im not a hero" argument with phara felt a little bit cliche, and finally the "your daughter cries for Mercy" gave me a bit of a mood whiplash.

(but i wont hold that last one against you, as you said, it was too good to not steal)

But other than those 3 things everything was perfect. Please, keep writing, see ya next time :D

"I remember him just fine", this right here was the pinnacle of this story to me. Once I read it, the waterworks were just let loose. Also, GOD DAYUM Mercy is savage as ****.

A beautifully written story, with an immense, yet gradual build up with the last chapter hitting it home. I loved the 'non-linear' plotline switching from past to present in the Overwatch timeline - it was a clever way to develop the relationships of the characters (especially the father-daughter relationship between 76 & Pharah). Also, kudos to you for including the best Overwatch pairing (Pharmercy of course). All in all, it was a great journey from beginning to end, and I'm looking forward to any more fics you're willing to drop.

First of all I ship it, all of it. I really like your story because I feel the characters on their emotionel levels and I can really get into the story and it's very captivating. I hope this isn't your last chapter I would love to see an epilogue where we see all the characters happy and together.

All the yes for this chapter! As soon as I read you will not get mercy from me, I thought about that post. Some balls Mercy has there! And YES! Jack finally told her. Great chapter. All that you are my dad was so sweet too.

I'm laughing way too much. Pretty cool story with both its lighthearted moments and more...tense moments.

Great so far, but isn't Mercy Swiss?

I really like your story and im exited to see where it goes :D

Ahh, this is fantastic, emotional and well written. I look forward to updates!

Oh no, the feels are strong with this one.

This is really good so far. Can't wait for more. That tension between Ana and Pharah!

I really like this! please post more :D

So two things, one the fic is not listed as completed and Thank goodness for that because I want more! And two I really enjoyed how you wrote solider 76, it's very different from how most people write him and that makes this stand out as in my opinion a better version of solider 76 than most. All in all great work, I look forward to a next chapter!

I like it:)