I loved the story. It was beautiful and honestly at the beginning I didn’t have much hope. But, I ventured on and with each chapter I find myself growing with gratitude I didn’t abandon this story.

You’ve done well, and frankly, made my day.

I LOVED THE FLUFF BTW

There so freaking cute OMG

LOVE IT!

this is awesome that is all :)

I am loving this go honest harry :)

I love it! Awesome! Glad I read it!
So. . . Thank you for the story?

You know that Lavender is also out of character, she is not a prude, she is described, to me and others to be very, what's the word? skanky.

I just realized that this story really is annoying. Just things Harry says, he's so out of character. The fact that you keep spelling off with only one f, off is like 'get off the subject' that is how you use off. When you use 'of' it should be like this 'I am standing at the top OF the mountain.' there is a difference. Hopefully you know that by now. Sorry, don't mean to complain.

That was awesome! Loved it!

This is so sweet, I love how you got everything in and made them such an adorable couple.

I just adore how you did the zoo scene,

great story but its FIREBOLT not firebold

when I first read this story I honestly thought it was a parody. good try though.

Nice story! The ending was really sweet.

aw! this is so sweet! good job!

"Harry was sitting at breakfast, not speaking to his friends at all. No hello's, No how are you's.. Nothing"

Apostrophes are used to denote posession, not plurals.

'It was *Malfoy's* wand.' - Posessive.

'There are many *Malfoys*.' - Plural.