This is a beautiful story, I love it! Hagrid is such a gentle, caring, genuine, kind soul. I’m glad that you made sure that he gets his own happily ever after. Thank you!

I don’t even know where to begin. I loved this story so much! Hagrid was characterised perfectly, you nailed his dialect and crippling emotiveness. Maxime was wonderful, and Harry and his family being around were perfect. I love the idea of Harry being the baby’s godfather!

While it doesn’t seem like an entirely original idea, I have personally never read anything like this before. I really wish that Hagrid and Maxime had canonically had a baby!
The story flowed well!

I spotted no SPaG errors!

You used the prompt correctly, but as Hagrid did play a major part in this story, I have taken a point off.

This was so lovely! I really enjoyed reading this.

A very cute and simple story !

The Crimson Mage.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww-its-so-cute!-wwwwwww