Dang! That Jacob and Eden Prime thing was freaking brilliant. This was just absolutely wonderful!

Damn, that was one fine story you've put together here. Really managed to hook me with this one. One of those stores that makes the actual in game story and characterization seem shallow by comparison. Rarely seen Kasumi done so well. And (spoilers) that twist of her trying to encourage the crew to warm up to Legion only for it to backfire so spectacularly as to leave her the outcast? That was heart wrenching.

So its as much about Legion teaching Kasumi. Wholesome fic is wholesome.

never thought I'd see Tali team up with Jacob but Geth are their common enemy. Garrus is SAVAGE

fuck

I loved this fic, and it's a great prequel for the two 'Tomorrow' stories!
You know, I didn't notice any overt continuity errors. Either my memory is shit, or the inconsistencies are pretty minor. Probably both :D
Whatever you decide to do next, I'll be glad to read it (at least if it's Mass Effect or something else I'm familiar with).

Good story keep it up .

The little details in this story that show and doesn't tell character development is great.

Especially the last bit of Legion getting Kasumi's name right (Kasumi-Goto not Goto-Kasumi) was a great little addition.

Thank you very much for finishing this, your Mass Effect fanfiction has been a joy to read throughout the years!

Love how this changed up with the mission, and the extras you added.

Once again, thank you for your efforts and the enjoyment that you have given this reader! So very very appreciative of your work.

Great story. Thanks for sharing.

Very cool, glad you managed to finish it! Great ending, glad to see the completion of kasumi’s introduction to the crew!

Thank you for this great read. Been hoping beyond hope to see it finished and here we are. Great use if character personalities, stellar writing, and always good to see Legion get more love.

Keep up the great work!

Another tale finished. Well done! Kinda hope for future Mass Effect work, but if not, this is a great note to end on.

Best of luck, whatever endeavor you acquire!

I think one of your greatest strengths is to portray the character as themselves. As fans we might love and adore Legion, but it doesn't change the fact that some people in-universe are genuinely terrified of the geth. To be able to portray that and ignore what we feel as fans is done really well.

Even though we know how this ends, I'm riveted in the journey that you're writing for us to reach that conclusion. I can't wait for more!