Not a bad story idea, just that you need the first and second Villai. Or need to find a replacement for them.

Trash fic

Man this is really confusing story.
Don't know if you are ever going to update this story but if u do then first explain many thing.
Like how the fuck is he in past in details. If he was friends with Sona and Rias then why is he there enemy now
what the fuck elders do to him and what are they having him do now.

Why so stuck up with Ria's?

It’s been a while. When is the next one?

I'm sure I'm not the first person to mention this, but you have to be at least part human to receive a sacred gear. Being a full-blooded devil would mess with that.

Will this be updated?

I liked the concept but couldn't understand shit my guy

I’m confused did Issei go back in time to replace riser, therefore being Phenex blood and Ravel’s actual brother, but he has all of his memories? If you could respond that would mean a lot. Good story

puedes dejar una lista del harem

i am very lost. you write as if the reader can read your mind, all I have gotten so far is sentences half written and filled with implications that only you are privy to. And then bang! Smut out of no where. I must be dumb. Can you explain what is happening and why Ise just rolled with waking up in another reality?

what a frustrating read.

A mess. Is this some sequel? because this thing is way too difficult to follow.

The story telling so jarring in this chapter too. Just introduce the peerage gradually as the story develops instead of this frustrating read and confusing guilt/self pity

I'm honestly confused with the entire story. The confusion didn't start from this chapter but a few chapters before.

what in the hell happen to Issei?