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I feel like this should be mentioned, but the OC is real self righteous. In the talk with desert tiger and Co he completely ignores what is actually happening in the war and says his own thing in an arrogant way, and even his interest in digimon comes across more as an annoying hipster rather than an actual fan of digimon that learned how to make a little irl crossover.

awesome :)

Just in case, that I'll be monitoring Asher inbox again as usual.

Ohhh are you trying to write your demon king idea from Gundam breaker 3 that you recently custom build it? Probably a good idea for those want to see a mass produce mobile suit type as demon king.

Good update here

I’m so glad that you updated the story. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Hmm not bad, not bad at all. There's couple issues here and there but overall I see promise in this.

Digimon and Gundam Seed is certainly a interesting mix, both different in their own ways but Asher I don't mind as a character but I wouldn't seeing him going through more challenges in the story. This is a war of hatred afterall, his gonna be seeing some nasty things in this and will be force to kill, that's something I want see more drawn towards here.

Kira I can understand why he doesn't want to kill anymore but well there was issues in regards of how he decided fight with the Freedom, it didn't go well against more experienced or highly skilled pilots like the Extendeds and more time that he try find ways disable them without killing them, the more people that were getting killed on the battle. Some stories have pointed this out as a result and some have given him wakeup call.

So curious if there's plans there.

Hmm they also better be careful with Digimons, Blue Cosmos will be very interested in those and if anything is go by... Some of them might just chose to fight with the Earth Alliance just as more will chose to fight with ZAFT.

And I also see Asher not gonna be able hide his secret for long now, there's already dots being connected here that the others are noticing when battle starts up. My one advise is don't be afraid show just how bad this war is getting and having Asher being more exposed to what war's truly like, like hatred between Earth Alliance and ZAFT is very comparable to when Germans and Russians fought each other during World War 2 there.

Overall, not bad here. If you ever want, I have one or two OCs you can have if you want? All up to you, we can talk in PM if you ever interested. Good luck, till next time.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

I sense digimons disguised as humans here, and those at least know what they're doing differently from most other digimons

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...I know you named the attacks based on those of Digimon but I can't help having a feeling that Ombi Gundam is a Real type from SRW.

Oi, it is me! Although I've already told you during lunch how it was, I just leave it here anyway (short version of cause).

IT'S DAMN GOOD!

There you go, man I just love the detective moment, I think the back kick you took from Detective Conan (I think is the karate girl, forgot her name during the mansion on early episode, with bandage guy?) Forgot to ask that :p

I knew you'll input the coffee scene from Cyber Sleuth, it's just too good to pass that up. Okla, we talk later tonight maybe. Ciao.

Hi~! :3 I have read your fic through so far and I love it! The way Asher acts is so funny and yet interesting at the same time. I especially love the way he calls the whole war a temper tantrum! XD! I never thought of it like that, and it is in a sense, so that is a good comparison. :3 And the back-kick thing he does is funny as well! XD! I hope to see Asher become Omni Gundam again soon! :3

when Asher shows that something is idiotic (this whole war) you must know at that moment that this something is really stupid.

make the omake of Asher's mother appear (in the form of Alphamon of preference) and start scolding him for entering the middle of a war and how she was worried about him while he is fighting a large group of mobile suits (in which she destroys as if it were nothing)

very good chapter... was well worth the wait... I was wondering if you were going to add a coffee scene into this story and I have to say that it was well worth it... I have to also say that the comedy for this story is really great... please keep up the good work...