It's hard to write about something like this but you've done a really good job. So well written, amazingly beautiful and sad

Loving it

This was tragic and yet beautifully written. Harry and Ron...mostly Ron were a bunch of prats tho. Thanks for sharing. I love your writing style.

I was (still am) crying during this story.
It's so sad and unfortunately a real problem that many people don't see.
From personal experience I know quite a lot about self harm and cutting and
how "good" it can feel.
Your writing was really wonderful and sensitive despite the dark theme.
How Draco's view changed and how fragile Hermione is was very well portrayed.
I especially liked the ending words from Draco. That he cares.

I love this. The ending is beautiful and it’s brilliant

Excellent

wow serious story but amazing

Very heartbreaking but oh so wonderful! Great job on this. I love Draco in this.

I know you said (quite firmly!) that you weren't going to expand on this but I really hope that you reconsider. It's a great piece of writing and the story has so much potential x

Love this story! Well done!

well that was sad, and heartbreaking, and eye opening, and wonderful. I loved Draco in this. I loved how he watched her, and kept a tab on her. I can't decide if I want it to keep going, or it the one shot was perfect, lol. I really enjoyed this.

Beautifully written. I have tears in my eyes. I would love to see more chapters of their story.

Heartbreaking. But I'm loving Draco for noticing and for keeping his eye on Hermione I'm just hoping what would be ron and harrys reaction when they found out what happened to Hermione. Please please make a sequel, lol. but seriously, heartbreaking..

This was riveting reading, getting the viewpoint of a person discovering the impact of their words on someone to whom they weren't as throwaway as they seemed to him. And then to compound this discovery with the knowledge that those who should know & love her best are neglectful & don't care as they should...

The story was simply done but very powerful & emotionally charged. Very adeptly handled subject.

ITS SO GOOD JESS! I love it!