Reviews for The Shattered One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greatchapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter, Please keep up the awesome work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see James growing a spine. Also happy to finally hear more about what exactly happened with Sasuke and Sakura. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter, Please keep up the awesome work. |
![]() ![]() I gotta admit. If I were Naruto I would have started killing every cryptic fucker I met by now. I mean for fuck sake is it SO DAMN HARD giving a straight awnser? Litterally, the moment Kurama started speaking in circles I would have grabbed the nearest weapon to smash his head in. Good story though, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this awesome story cant wait for new chapters |
![]() ![]() I honestly think naruto would atleast eventually be friends with Richter kinda like a mix of rwby naruto sasuke and sai |
![]() ![]() He should be around pyyrhas level maybe a step or 2 above even because he seems to be a lot more dark naruto more than the chaotic neutral or good canon naruto is |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you wroteI'm contempt where I am" when you meant to write "Content". Great chapter, everything is coming together nicely. The mindscape scene was good, but the scene with Fuu was written a little confusingly. Besides that, you got several balls in the air, so I look forward to what you do with them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter:-) :-) Cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter, Please keep up the great work. |