| Reviews for On the Surface: Part 1: Sasuke's Story |
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onyx pearl chapter 1 . 12/4/2018 pleasseee do d part twooo |
xx onyx pearl xx chapter 1 . 12/4/2018 i love this story! please do update |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2016 My gut tells me you're never gonna update again and leave this story like this. That you abandoned this story and your followers of this story and it's such a shame. |
LightHouseHaven chapter 1 . 9/15/2016 wHEN WILL U UPDATE THIS IM SERIOUSLY SO SHAKEN UP OVER THIS |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2016 Please please please update this! It's been how long?! Don't make us wait much longer please, or your fans might lose interest! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2016 You should update this more often. |
DanceOfStarlight chapter 1 . 7/22/2016 oh this is cool now, nice job with the writing, awesome as always, keep it up gurl, love sasukes pov for this, want to know whats going on with jinko and stuff, update soon babe |
Shipping Angel 24 chapter 1 . 7/22/2016 Oh my godddd, it's finally hereeee! I thought for sure that you'd given up on these stories, but I'm so glad you're back! As I'm sure all of your other fans are glad as well! And of course, your writing is still amazing. I love this from Sasuke's POV. Someone mentioned how it's just the same story, but I think once you start adding in his routine with Anko and Naruto and the club and the bars and stuff, and start delving more into his past, this is going to be just as amazing. I do agree with everyone when they say it doesn't need to be as long, and I noticed you had this pilot chapter have the events from three or four chapters from the original Sakura's POV, so yea. That's nice. Keep up the great work! You are an amazing writer! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2016 It was a very nice chapter! Sasuke's pov is always interesting |
lovesasusakuforever chapter 1 . 7/21/2016 I am very happy to see you back on this story. Sasuke's pov was needed as he's was so mystery in sakura's part one. And you're doing excellent job writing in his pov. Keep it up and update soon ;) |
Fienna chapter 1 . 7/21/2016 oh my god, feels like ive been waiting for this story for a year. i was so indulged in sakuras pov, i remember constantly stopping by your profile to check if you released the next part lol youre an extremely cunning writer, im super excited for the continuation! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2016 I am really happy to read this story from Sasuke's point of view... Of course I still want to know what will happen in the future with part two, but I think it's necessary to read Sasuke's thoughts, what went through his mind and the feelings he has for Sakura, how much she means to him. He was always a misterious and collected man, so to understand better his character, to feel his struggle and to immagine how the break up with Sakura at the end of the first part might have had an impact on him, it's fundamental to know his past, his personality and his way of thinking, for this reason I thank you immensely for this new perspective on your wonderful story! ;) |
evillivevile chapter 1 . 7/20/2016 This is great so far and it is just as good as Sakura's Story. So I dont want just the cliff notes version because it'll feel rushed and the best thing about stories like this is the slow build and the internal monologue developing alongside the conversations. But, it's still the same story told twice. There has to be something new to this version. Not just the same events from Sasuke's pov with some slight changes but something deep at its core that gives this reason. Some key event which impacts on Sasuke's thought process and maybe even had an alluded to, hidden impact in Sakura's story too. Otherwise I'll just be reading this because you're a great writer, which you definitely are, but not because I'm excited for a great story. Because its the same plot I've read before. |
kaysshi chapter 1 . 7/20/2016 Yay! Finally! Well im more excited to hear from you that youre still writing but I think I just want to read sasukes story after part two since im not entirely too curious about his side but I'll make sure to read it after part 2. Best of luck on this POV! |
sorekara chapter 1 . 7/19/2016 I really like this story. Keep up the good work. You have my support. |