So long since an update! I'm quite enjoying this story and need to know how it'll turn out!

Me muero por ver la continuación!

hehehehehe Dark Link. Loooove it! oh man though faceing him was aweful Link should have brought the megaton hammer. Oh wait that doesn't exist yet hehehehe! anyway Love the story so far hope you continue it!

Why do you like so much the dilemmas? Is not a critic, I'm just kidding because I love how Ghirahim still plays with Link like "maybe I love you, maybe I want to kill you", that's so him. Also, I felt like a bitch because I get mad with Zelda for leaving Link after what he told but haha I use to forget that she went through a lot too, at the beggining it felt weird that she left so easy but it was just because the fact that they share the weight of the journey and that make them understand each other like none of their mates can, that fact escaped me. You're a good friend, Zelda, forgive me for being dumb xD

It was a good chapter, I didn't expected Zelda to joining him in his quest. I'm curious about how it will go. Thanks a lot for your effort 3

"As he held it up to his face, he was shocked and slightly excited to see the love bite, dark against his skin, fresh from the night before" Ah! Coleridge's flower! I love that literary resource. I always have thought the communication through dreams is an interesting topic and I like the way you made the dreams, first like a distorted memory, then like the guilty punishing in the unconsciousness of the dreams and finally putting on the table the possibility of actual presence of Ghirahim in his dreams. Besides, I think their personalities are right, the flirty demon and the puppy knight. I really enjoyed it.

FINALLY AN UPDATE ! That's a great chapter and I don't mind waiting for long for another chapter, this fic is amazing. Hope u update soon.

Aaaah you updated! *happy dance* :D

Heh, not sure about Latin in this; it's another world altogether, maybe Old Hylian would be better suited? Anyway, I'm on my toes here; hopefully Link will finally manage to rescue Ghirahim from limbo. How the blade stayed dead and unresponsive was heartbreaking...

This is good.

GREAT chapter !

Cool. Good.

Whoo! So happy you updated this. As for Link... he never gets a break, poor kid. I feel sorry for Fledge too, by the way. I always thought he had a thing for Link throughout the game c;

This Chapter is really good . Link getting angry is a scary and if I were Zelda I'd run away XD . I hope I can see Ghirahim soon tho. Thank you for this Chapter it's really nice . Please update soon .

Amazing idea, amazing story. With characters so in role it feels like it's taken straight out of the game!
Can not wait for the next one!,

This chapter is great ! I love how Link is desperate and I love the way you write .. but I hope that you make the chapters longer .. please ? Thanks and please update soon !

Uuuh, I'm interested c: I hope there's more! Your descriptions are wonderful.

Only critique: This POV thing. It's superfluous in stories, and makes them appear unprofessional. Also Link would probably be too shaken after such a dream to simply go back to sleep?