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Guest chapter 4 . 4/22/2017 So,when will you come back? |
Sparta49 chapter 3 . 7/19/2016 I see. So long as you tell us what weapons he carries then we all good. |
Sparta49 chapter 2 . 7/19/2016 Me again (guest) sorry my account got log off. Now that that's out of the way, the spelling. I'm not roasting you, in fact i'm here to tell you that you made less spelling erors. Replace the misspelling of these words with: on, revolutionary, as well, rotors, flies, repulsors, Slight, and at least. Back on the armor. Can we get a description on what the armor class is. Does it look like forerunner armor. Is the armor made out of a mixture of Titanium A Nanocomposite Hardlight Regenerative Liquid metal Can the armor do this: Actively adapt in combat Also is sapphire a smart metastable A.I or dumb. What his height. His weapons/mods. Augmentation advancements. What his background. Now this may sound like i judging you, but i not, i just want more of a description of how this is going to work out. I hope you have a good day. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2016 Just misspelling for these words: vengeful, repentance, atmospherex2, Manhattan, malfunction, going, immediate, exited, eerie, resemblance, Sapphire, that's century, Man's, and Captain. Could you also adds some of these in the suit. Built in Spartan armour weapons Electric arc: Can fry enemies shield and suits, while latching on to another target. Hologram/Variants: Hologram produces an identical holographic copy of the user that heads to a location designated by the player and stops if it reaches it. The hologram will flicker away after 10 seconds or if it is damaged. Cloak field is a MJOLNIR Augment Mod for SPARTANS that allows Spartans to temporarily cloak nearby allies along with himself. Emp Blast: Sends out electric blast that fries anything electronic within a 20 meter radius. Stun Blast: Stuns an enemy in a 10-20 meter radius. Auto sentry: This object can come out of a small slipspace generator integrated into the suit. The Autosentry is an automated turret that fires slow-to fast moving projectiles/energy power at nearby opponents. Visor Beam: Integrated into the helmet’s visor it shots as a similar fashion to the UNSC portable laser. It charges for four seconds then unleashes a bright-reddish blue blast at a target. Dampers are installed in helmet so wearer's head does not break and snap. Power drain: Drains power to enemy suit or nearby objects. Seeker Drone: Small nanobot drones width of a pinky fingernail these alert the user of enemies if suit monitor tracker is disabled. It can also be a explosive so if a enemy is spotted in can go toward target and explode outwards in a 5 meter radius. Ground Pound: When a SPARTAN is in mid-air, the Ground Pound ability allows them to target a specific area on the ground below them and launch themselves towards it. Upon reaching it, they will smack into it with a punch, dealing area-of-effect damage and instantly killing any enemies they land directly on top of. The ability has a short charge time in which the player is allowed to aim, but is also a target for enemies in the vicinity. Only areas below the SPARTAN can be targeted with Ground Pound. Electric Smoke: Is a tactical ability that focuses on preventing SPARTANS from being destroyed by overwhelming enemies. When activated, it disperses smoke, which may hide your SPARTAN’s movement from enemies, that quickly becomes electrified, damaging and disorienting non-friendly infantry or nearby enemies. Power gauntlets: It generates an energy field around it that violently disrupts solid and semi-solid matter. Built in shoulder blades Anti-tank missiles: These missiles are used with micro technology that destroyed infantry, mechs and tanks if placed properly. If you can great, if not tyen i understand. Keep writing. |
AnalPoptarts chapter 1 . 7/18/2016 I'm very excited for this story. There arent a lot of Halo Avengers crossover's on this site |