Very good point of view from Ayeka. Judging from your bio she's not someone you really seem to think about, but this fic is fantastically well thought out and deeply written. It provides a great insight into Ayeka not just as a princess, but a woman who has tasted what life could be. I look forward to reading your other works!

That was an excellent fic. It centers on Ayeka (my favorite character) It has Tenchi and Ryoko (My favorite pairing) and the angst, I love angsty stories. I think you wrote Ayeka well, it's not easy to write a story for something in a way you're not use to. I know I could never write a Tenchi/Ayeka fic without making it sound corny and/or out of character. Anyways, again excellent.

Robyn (Amethyst1403)

As much as I love the idea of Tenchi/Ayeka I really loved your story. If Tenchi were to choose Ryoko (which is probably the most likely scenario) this is probably how Ayeka would have reacted.

I’m happy to see that after her two year grieving period Ayeka was able finally stand up for herself and in the process become a more mature person because of it. She’ll only become more mature as her travels continue.

This piece was very well written, congratulations! I hope to be able to read more of your work in the future.

Ja ne,

~Rain Crystal~

I second Darrian.

As soon I heard that a Ryoko fan made this, I said, "It figures."

Just to let you know, there are a lot of stories named "I am Ayeka" before and after this story came out. You should have picked a more unique. Better yet, you just shouldn't have written it. But that probably applies to most of your stories.

It sucked.

I'm sorry, but I wasn't impressed. This is an Ayeka fic written by a Ryoko fan and much of it reads that way. I seen the cliches concerning her and Azusa, etcetera coming and your dislike for her does shimmer beneath the exterior. It doesn't stare me in the face, but I can feel it. I can appreciate the effort, but in the end, I think I'd rather read a fic by an author that truly cares for her, like Beagle-San or Davner, and not just one that does this to write something different, if that is what you can truly call this.

Wow! That was the first word I thought of when I read this. I really love the way this was written. I to have a better appreciation for the princess now.

I am an Ayeka fan and I really appreciate the effort you went through to see the character from another perspective. It's not something a lot of authors take the time to do, which is a shame because your story turned out wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it. You have a great way with words, this was very witty. I look forward to seeing your work in the future, from what I can see it shall be brilliant. You really have a fantastic talent. I also just wanted to say that I believe you kept everyone in character, a merit that not many authors (myself included unfortunately) have been able to do or even attempt to do. This was really a stupendous piece of fiction! Later yo, Icy

a great story. you should really write a sequel to this.

Wow it's great Ayeka is totally in character, she does have potential for an rebelious/aggresive attitude which is good. Erm is it me or did I miss out on who the mystery guy was on the end of last chapter?

I know I have already told you my opinions on this fic, but I'm going to say them again. I honestly believe that this is the best fic that you have written here bud. You have proven the dynamism of your writing. Very well done in all aspects. This story evolved so well from day one, and Aeka was perfectly portrayed. Too many people portray her as the eveil b*tch, or in the 'oh poor me' mode. You more than helped flesh out her character in this fic. For once someone portrayed Aeka as alive, and not a static side character. I applaud you for that. Well done my friend.

Great work man.

Nicely done. Bravo.

That was a good ending. I'm glad Aeka got to leave to go find her trueself in the end. Aeka's characterisation was really well done. _

Indeed your story provided a very interesting insight into Ayeka's character. I for my part read it not so much for the purpose of entertainment, but to get a better understanding of Ayeka's position in the Tenchi Muyo OVA universe.

Thank you for writing this story and for offering a chance to extend the horizon of your readers.

Now I will eagerly await an update on your other fics.

Kryo

I wouldn't want to inflate your head any more

than it's already alarmingly large amount, but

this was a great story, especially considering your topic and the effort you gave for something you are not one hundred percent excited about...

Is your head any bigger now? ...