You write beautifully.

WOW... I'm not a fan of the 'Ziva is Dead' thing. But this was really nice. I enjoyed reading it. Good job.

First of all, how dare you?
Second of all, HOW DARE YOU?
No, no, I'm just joking; I applaud you for being heartbreaking and heart wrenching. This is beautiful, dark (oh-so-VERY-dark), and full of anguish. Your style of writing is just so truthful and painful: Tali at school, heartbroken Tony, and concerned Papa Gibbs and Senior confiscating bourbon and sending them to therapy. Watching The Sound of Music, alone, with the unopened bottle of bourbon: that is just so POWERFUL and sad.
This might be the most depressing Post-FF fic on the planet, so thank you very much.

Enjoy your writing. Enjoy reading Tiva even the sad stories. Please continue

You know my opinion about your writing but you also know my opinion for the TIVA stories which don't have happy ending i hope your next story will be different and much happier than this.

liked!

You are such an amazing storyteller.

this was outstanding I cried also but it was worth it. Thanks

You really get my emotions going crazy with this story. Love this story but it is very hard to read so sad but beautiful too. Yes please write a happy Tiva.