Reviews for The Man Who Became Peace
ZenRaven chapter 2 . 4/9
Give him a fire quirk too. It will evolve into scorch or blaze quirk combined with wind. Or maybe lightning i dont care do what you want. But give him a second quirk. Also can you give momo the ability to make an armor of nanobots like Ironman that will be a good use of her ability, also the ability to absorb back what she created so she doesn't have to lose her fat.
ZenRaven chapter 1 . 4/9
He should have a fire quirk too, to mix it up with wind. That will actually be cool.
Mutant Type Y chapter 2 . 1/21
I generally like this story but since it haven't been updating in like what 4 years now ,Happy 2020, i feel like this should continue with a pletora of updates and not stuck at chapter 2, nice add on the last bit there i like souma aswell. I think in a year this Fanfiction should be updating more frequently than the past 4 years but anyway that is my take on this a.k.a my review it is great but the updates would leave me hanging for more than i would like. If you don't like my review then just ignore it. Good luck and i hope you do good
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2019
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deathgod22 chapter 1 . 2/25/2018
I hope that you will update this story... It's an interesting story
soulreapern chapter 2 . 5/17/2017
Please update as soon as you can, Great story!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/20/2017
Great chapter update soon!
ExDaGod chapter 2 . 4/11/2017
Update
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2016
I cant believe he just threw aside his mothers balde hahaha i thought he cared about her more then minato
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2016
please make todoroki is naruto rival not bakugo
anoyak111 chapter 2 . 10/8/2016
Finally a second chapter and love what your doing and also naruto and momo interaction
dragonjay87 chapter 2 . 10/8/2016
Love it continue please
becauseno chapter 2 . 10/7/2016
Nice story! Although writing style could be better... I feel that ur brushing through the story too quickly... perhaps you could write from different character's pov and include feelings and thoughts as well... i'd suggest a beta reader/editor to help. Other than that, AMAZING!
Lightningblade49 chapter 2 . 10/7/2016
Sequel chapter was even better then first chapter, I love Naruto & Momo's relationship they are clearly a couple just one of them has trouble admitting loving a certain idiot.
Lifke123 chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
Its toooo gooood
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