Talk about role reversals; Beca betrays Chloe, Jesse is the one who wants to save her. Not liking this turn of events. What happened to Stacie and Emily? Will we see them again. Really shocked you had Beca betray Chloe twice. Ugh, can’t wait to read the next chapter.

nice this story is really good dude.

Ooohhh. Interesting turn. Can’t wait to read more!

The mystery deepens
Will Stacie, Emily, or any of the others be found?
Are they dealing with an Umbrella Corporation type situation?
Can’t wait to read and find out.
Thanks for the update

this ones good dude the cliffhangers kill me lol love this story

Thanks so much for the update. These chapters have been great; the cliffhangers have left me wanting more. Can’t wait to read what happened to Chloe, and who these new people are.

Thanks for the update. Heck of a cliffhanger. Jesse is a real jerk. How are you bringing back Chloe? It’s not right, having her gone. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.

So is Chloe really going to turn?
You can’t!
Ugh!
Great chapter, but damn I hate cliffhangers.
Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
BTW - Good on Stacie, Jesse is an ass

Great chapter, the action was interesting. Definitely left it with a sense of foreboding. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.

Very interesting read. A different twist on Chloe. Quite interesting. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.

Ok. Done reading chapter 1 and 2. Little bit upset about the candace and Everest thing. But I'm sure you will make justice. Also less action in chapter one. I guess I can live with that if more action Chloe is there on next chapters.

Hey why stop..please continue. I like badass Chloe.

Update soon.

I'm quite confused, some of the things don't add up or they are not explained properly. I'm still really interested to see what happens and how beca is meant to figure out she loves Chloe and not Jesse if Chloe "isn't" there with her also I'd expect beca to be more distraught about leaving and finding out Chloe is dead like shut down for a bit, not really talk to people, cry when she thinks no one is listening just be real distant from everyone.

I'm scared for Chloe, but I'm also angry at her. I can't wait to know what her reasons are and what's happening to her. I have a bad feeling about Jesse. Get me some Bechloe soon!