Reviews for The Magical Child
QueenOfTheIronSwords chapter 28 . 6/27
Will Valtor/Baltor be in year 2? I really hope so. Cool story it was awesome.
Lindsay guenard chapter 28 . 6/20
Will you update for godsakes
MoonlightMiracle.SakurianaHime chapter 28 . 5/8
Please update soon!
MillieBelle chapter 28 . 4/2
Will Domino ever be restored as a kingdom? I really hope so because I want Bloom and Daphne to live like princesses.
Awesomeme841263 chapter 15 . 3/19
Really good! Just wondering how Regulus is alive, since I’m the books he died from drinking the potion in the pot for Salazar Slytherin’s locket which was turned into a locket.
Infernoinside chapter 7 . 12/26/2019
good chapter, im hoping you put Bloom with Draco and they go to Alfea at some point where the show starts, dont really know if Draco would go to Red fountain but it's a thought
Uzushiogakure chapter 27 . 12/26/2019
Merry Christmas to you as well and great work with this chapter it's nice to see them try to talk about what the experience with lean it up isn't going to end well for them and I know to get through this after all they're all strong and they are surrounded by their family who loved them so they can definitely get through this.

I look forward to seeing you next chapter in 2020 truly did have you say this year has gone by so quickly.
Kathryn.Anne.953 chapter 27 . 12/26/2019
Thank you so much for the update it is one of the awesome Christmas present ever! Can't wait for 2020 to come to be able to read more great stories from you. Have a wonderful and Happy New Year.
MillieBelle chapter 27 . 12/25/2019
Thank you for the update!

Btw, do you think that Cedric and Bloom would be a good pair together? Cuz I want to see what its like for one of the Winx Club members to have an older man(Not too old though) for their boyfriend. Cedric seems like Bloom's type. Plus, He's freaking gorgeous. Just a passing thought, mind you.

Merry Christmas!
Uzushiogakure chapter 26 . 12/6/2019
Well this is a great chapter and I'm glad that they have gotten out of there definitely glad that they have gotten out of there granted I do hope they're not resting on their Laurels or anything because I don't think any of them should believe for a moment that their trap will hold Darkar for very long. I'm pretty sure everything they can think of doing to Darkar has been tried or done to him already and obviously he's still around all magic can be overcome by equal or greater magic or by greater knowledge hell even anti-magic can be overcome by powerful enough Magic.

And while I definitely understand where Oritel it's coming from at the end of the day he's a king and a wielder of the dragon-flame he should understand that some power comes with a Collis hell you could say all power comes with a cough since no matter how little power you have you'll be hated and feared or both by those who have no power whatsoever but some power specially if power is great as the dragon flame comes with great cost. And having Darkar eternally after your family's blood is one of those cost along with everyone else in the magical universe that might want your dragon flame for one reason or another and that's just one of the cost you have to bear if he and his family are not prepared to shoulder that cost than they need to give the Dragon-flame to someone what do will who does that should get Darkar off their backs.

By the way I don't think your comparison of fairy wings and Harry's wand would be that accurate because Wizards don't actually need ones for their magic at the end of the de a wizard one that's just a two granted it's more than that because it has a will of its own but still just a tool it's kind of like the Weasleys car that gained a will of its own because of the enchantments placed upon it granted the car was accidentally while the wands seem to be deliberate but at the end of the day it's generally a tool that can be broken or stolen and easily replaced but it won't affect the wizards magic in any way except that they won't properly be able to use their Magic because they were taught how to use magic with a wand not to how to do it without the need for One. And wands are mainly only used in Europe and America everywhere else in the magical world as in most of the Wizarding World, Wizards prefer to use Wandless magic the rest of the world see wands as a useful tool but prefer traditional wandless magic. Wands are a crippling weakness if they're broken or stolen the wizard or witch is very very limited in how they can use their magic because they were never taught how to do it wandlessly and this I can imagine is very useful for the magical governments of Europe and America because it is used as a punishment as we've seen.

Anyway considering how important a fairies Wings are to them it would be more accurate if you said that fairies wings were similar to the emotional stability of wizards and witches because as we sign the books when Nymphadora was incredibly depressed and sad when Remus ran off on her, she was almost entirely disconnected from her magic she couldn't even shape-shift anymore. And we saw something similar with Voldemort's Mother after she stopped using whatever spell or Love Potion she was using on Tom Riddle senior and he realized what she was and what she did to him and immediately left her she was so emotionally and mentally destroyed that she seemed completely disconnected from her magic and didn't even want to live anymore only desiring to die she only live long enough to give birth to Voldemort and then after that her magic granted her wish of wanting to die at least that's what it seems like anyway.

I look forward to the next chapter because I'm really anxious to find out if Bloom and Daphne and Marion are going to be okay they need some proper healing and they definitely need a mind healer just to be sure would be kind of nice if their entire memory of Shadowhaunt could be erased completely but I suppose that solution might backfire somehow in the future.

Anyway brilliant work and I can't wait for your next chapter.
Uzushiogakure chapter 25 . 11/23/2019
That dude is evil as hell but it's to be expected I suppose considering what he is. Poor Marion, Daphne and Bloom truly I fear for how this is going to affect the psyche of the girls. But thanks for letting me know that things will get better in the coming chapters they definitely need to get them out of that place before it twist them into a darkened version of themselves which is what Darkar no doubt wants so he can have the Dragon Flame and that's you have the keys he needs to get the ultimate power. And since Darkar just woke up this is probably their best shot at doing him some damage that would hopefully keep him preoccupied for a few years.
Knight5946 chapter 25 . 11/21/2019
Ok I hate to say it but this chapter is too canned dark for my liking, the next chapter can better be of darkar getting his ass beaten so canned badly that his body disintegrates and his magic scattering to the four winds never to be seen again
MillieBelle chapter 25 . 11/20/2019
This chapter is definitely an eye-opener on making a darker version of the cartoon "Winx Club." You've done a splendid job on your writing skills once again, xMidnightDreamsx.

And if you could, could you pair Sky and Bloom together? It would be nice if the Winx Club part isn't straying off as much from the original. Not that I'm not fine with you changing most of the storyline, I just still think that Bloom and Sky are best paired together than Bloom and Draco. Besides, in the first season of the Winx, Bloom told off Riven that she's not into bad boys.

I hope to read another chapter soon!
Uzushiogakure chapter 24 . 11/1/2019
Well this whole situation is turned into a horrific mess and boom has been badly crippled for a Fairy and I'm going to assume Daphne is next next chapter yeah this is a horrifically messy situation about the only good that came out of it is that the family was reunited however considering the situation they're in I suppose that's hardly a silver lining at this point. And it seems like a pretty dark and hard the situation then and if Darkar is at full power I don't see how they're going to rescue the girls let alone Marion and Oritel as well they would need a freaking Army of Paladin's and or Specialist just to distract him long long enough to get everybody out. So yeah it definitely got dark fast and you said the next one is going to be a little bit darker I really hope the dragon flame wakes up and does something to help them Escape Lord Darkar, that said I do look forward to your next chapter.
Guest chapter 24 . 11/1/2019
OMG! Damn I hadn’t expected such a wonderful but yet kinda dark chapter! Darkar is a twisted creature for torturing Oritel and Marion like that, especially Marion after ripping off her wings, damn that must’ve been painful and poor Bloom too and she hadn’t even flown on her wings yet that’s really sad!

It must be agonizing for Daphne seeing her parents greatly injured!

Ooh not to mention the fact that she really believed that her father had been dead for all those years knowing that it might’ve been all a lie (manipulation at its finest)! I feel so bad for daphne the most because she’s the one who witnessed her entire family who'd vanished before her eyes (if you could say that), she must be in so much shock!

Hopefully Alec and everyone would rescue them from Darkar’s clutches — I can’t imagine the horrors that the Potters, Reg, Siri, Rem, would be upon seeing lord Darkar who could also take form of a dark Phoenix— he’s literally creepy!

But I’m glad that (if what Luna said is true about them being in the company of light, since I highly doubt they are in the show, would go along with them)! This is why I really love this book, I feel like it it’s more in-depth and there’s so much better world build (in the Winx Club universe aspect then the official show) ya I believe the show should’ve ended at the first movie!

Please update soon... I’m so curious about what’s gonna happen next chapter! :D
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