| Reviews for The Intent to Live |
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  Uk chapter 7 . 9h Stop with the random shit You waste of Spence bitch Focus is needed in fights This is not some Spider-Man nonsense where wordplay is exchanged! |
 jayzeck chapter 1 . 7/24 Lmao you were reading smut at 2 and half years old... tsk tsk |
| Marionette-Hime chapter 12 . 7/18 Great story! Chapter 12 is hilarious, and your main character is awesome. Hope you continue writing this. :) |
| Sage Nameless chapter 22 . 7/5 tfw you find an incredible fic that fits all the criteria you have for greatness but it's 70k words and abandoned :( Seriously though, I absolutely love Taichi's power arc in this story, it fits my preferences to a T |
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/5 please it’s beautiful ur characters r hella fleshed out Sakura and Ino aren’t that bad anymore taichi kicks ass djfnsoejcndwocjeohfwoecwoefhdwodcmwodcfhwoeucjowd ur writing is *chef’s kiss* vkjnfislkddnsklnfsloejfnsjjd g |
| 9VE chapter 22 . 6/30 I love this story soooooo much. you made me giggle like a madwoman every chapter in some way or form (I'm a sucker for dry wit). Your story arcs are fantastic and I like the unique take on the universe as a whole. Looking forward to more! :D |
| wolfedge10 chapter 9 . 6/29 Their sensei is useless! |
| wolfedge10 chapter 8 . 6/29 So how was the sensei spared the Uzumaki anger again? Seems a little lack luster that mama Uzumaki was satisfied with talking to just Hiruzen...No PTSD/trauma for the kid? 63 broken bones from one person n as soon as he wakes up he's chill with that person? |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/26 I love this story. I’m only to the wave arc but it’s already awesome. I like that you had the main character actually lose something, rather than making it OP. Makes for a more engaging story |
| justlovereadin chapter 20 . 6/25 I would like to point out that your logic is slightly flawed as it was stated multiple times in the fight where Lee fought Gaara that Lee's taijutsu was better than some jonin Ed when you're talking about the people able to survive tsunade's hits you're talking about Kages, high level jounin and other S rank characters |
| SappySoulTaker chapter 22 . 6/25 why do I even start these ancient stories anyways. I well it's probably for the best as honestly author is pretty dismember happy when it comes to the good guys and there's a huge turn off. |
| LittleFlower2012 chapter 22 . 5/24 I hope you update soon, i really like this story! |
| Trunky chapter 22 . 5/3 It’s revive time |
| raychii521 chapter 4 . 4/29 Well your OC swear a lot. For a guy how is reborn and learn a new language and is friend doesn't swear... translate your old way of talking into Japanese look a lot harder than speak like the people that soround you. Well that's my opinion. I Just want to know how someone doesn't change after reincarnation because the world around change so the way people speak change. So lot of different influence compared to modern English. good chapter |
| BuddhaBuddha chapter 4 . 3/29 The techno-babble was indeed, too much. Ended up skipping through it, was a pain in the ass to read through. |
