Absolutely loved this. The story is more fleshed out, and more enjoyable to read. Please continue this if you get the chance.

I love this story. I often 're read it along with the older but longer version.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I love both versions but please update if not this then at least update the previous version since I want to see your story completed.

Loved your original and hope you come back to this re-write!

I read the original and I loved it this one is more detailed and is just as wonderful I hope this continues

please tell me this story is still going on I love it to death. the original and this rewrite. Don't give up on it my whole family reads it and waits for more.

Hello!
I an a vivid fan of your first story (Inoue) and I love this revised version! So much more feeling and explication! Thank you very much for taking the time to rewrite it! Hope to read you soon!

A brilliant story - the revised version is noticeably more coherent and flows much better, but I still loved the first draft! Shiori is a remarkable but relatable character, and it's so interesting to see a side of Konoha that is rarely focused on or done well! Hope you get the time and inspiration to keep going with your writing!

This and the original are one of my favorite SI fanfiction stories ever. I was wondering if they are abandoned or if you plan to continue and eventually compete them?

This is a most wonderful fic! I have never read a completely civilian character with little to no ties to ninja and canon characters before but your OC’s are wonderful with brilliantly fleshed out personalities. I don’t know how you overcame the temptation to give her some kind of ability beyond those logical for her station. Thank you for a wonderful story!

I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY

IS FANTASTIC

Please continue.

I read the original write up of the story and I love it! Can't wait for you to catch up in this one!

Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz