Reviews for Just a Casual Observer
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 12/10/2019
This was really good. I don't know how I hadn't read it before but I am just glad I found it. The dates were so fun to read about, from too perky to too dreary and everything in between. Then there was Emma who intrigued Killian from the very beginning. He thought there was Henry as the man in her life. Which he is, but as her son, not boyfriend. Lovely to see Belle and the true friendship between she and Killian. Lovely to see the kisses, and the familiar phrases. Lovely to see a happy beginning. Thanks for writing.
Pia Bartolini chapter 1 . 10/1/2019
Oh I loved this! What a cute prompt idea and it really flowed well. I felt like the dates were a good comedic counterpoint to some of the more serious backstory hinted at with them both. And who doesn’t love CaptainSwan kisses, eh?
mansts chapter 1 . 11/25/2017
Loved this story!
CShipper chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
This was so cute! I was actually expecting Killian to be the waiter, but I love how it worked out with Emma as the waitress! And Emma offering commentary on all of Killian's dates, but he's drawn to her! And because she doesn't trust his judgement, she offered to help out and find Killian a better date! And when she saw Killian and Belle at Granny's, she was a little disappointed that the "date" worked out so well! And then Killian thinking that Henry was Emma's boyfriend and knowing that he shouldn't like her because she was taken but couldn't help himself anyway. What a relief for him when he found out that Henry was Emma's son! And the second kiss was just great! I also love that Regina had Emma work at her restaurant, to help her son's other mother get back on her feet in the small town. This was amazing, thanks so much for this!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
Oh my gosh she rates him as well! This was hysterical from start to finish. The tone was lovely. I felt like crap today and this story helped make me feel better. Thank you so much :) ~cupidkillswithtraps
Lonelywicked chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
This was excellent... short but sweet.
Polkie2 chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
I loved this story. Emma is at her best when she is snarky - well second best, her best is when she is with Killian. Henry is such a sweetheart!
belovedbrat chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
loved this.
SupermarketCrayons chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
This was interesting, funny and canon within its divergence. I really liked it!
Kmomof4 chapter 1 . 8/26/2016
Very cute! Would love if you continued it!
CherryWolf713 chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Cute! I love Emma's comments
The White Leopard chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
Fluffy, flirty goodness. I love it. So cute.
Darkly Dreaming chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
YES! GAH! Yes! I love it.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
Love this! Nice happy tale for a Saturday morning. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
Cute. I liked it different from anything else I read recently
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