| Reviews for The Soldier |
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   hapyjohn chapter 5 . 6/28 Bro your from Temecula? im from Hemet... |
| hapyjohn chapter 1 . 6/28 i feel a 3rd person writing style would be more suited for this... |
| avneeshsaman chapter 1 . 1/14 Ok, So arc 2 is coming or not? |
| Limrix chapter 16 . 10/21/2019 This was awesome, I wish you kept going though. |
| Dimiel chapter 1 . 5/5/2019 Huh...I'm really interested now. I was reading Oda Nobuna no Yabou manga just a few minutes ago and have been craving for a fanfic that has a soldier, a modern one in it. Looks like I got my wish. There are some grammatical errors and all, but I don't mind it. If you want, I can be your beta reader. I can fix and improve scenes. I'm not in my current profile but just search "Dimiel" if you want to. |
| Gamerman22 chapter 2 . 4/18/2019 M-1911A1 does not fire 9mm! It’s .45 ACP (Automatic Colt Pistol) Colts M-1911A1. It’s still popular and icon pistol. Because it’s famous for reliables, stopping powers and low recoils. |
| Katyuska chapter 16 . 1/2/2019 when will you continue? you are excellent writing! : D |
| AmethystPone chapter 14 . 12/23/2018 It's Ciao. |
| AmethystPone chapter 8 . 12/23/2018 Standard Flintflock Musketman can fire 3 shots per minute... Minie ball is the solution to making rifle (a more accurate gun) achieving the same fire rate as standard musket of the time. |
| AmethystPone chapter 10 . 12/23/2018 Hwacha isn't a very accurate weapon... It would be better to give them schematic for Cannons...With its ball shots, heavy shots, chainshots, Scatter shots...It would be far better than Hwacha. |
| Azrael and Bernael chapter 6 . 8/27/2018 Why did he sing? It just made the whole thing kinda cringy. I see that ya you have some original ideas and what not but if you have an entirely new OC going along with everything it just makes it seem like his presence isn't really affecting much. Also he's an adult and trained soldier I doubt he would give in to a childish impulse like hitting a dumb kid who doesn't know what he's talking about much less allow his friend to get into that situation. Regardless I like the story so far GJ. |
| Viper4K chapter 16 . 8/26/2018 Will You update this fanfic, or is it dead? |
| RizomataNyan chapter 16 . 12/30/2017 fantastic chapter i really hope you update this soon also how about developing warship later? something like fuji class battleship is powerful enough for that era though something like the kongo fuso and nagato class is also awsome |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/24/2017 the 1911 fires 45 acp not 9mm and holds 8 to 7 rounds in the mag |
| Ferno16 chapter 16 . 12/10/2017 By god! This is! I... I have no words to describe how much I love this story! Industrial revolution? Your a FING GENIUS! |
