This was very touching!

It kills me to read this part, her chance winning she her losing her hair. But Bill being supportive telling her, her hair isn't what makes you,you. I loved how he helped shave her head and telling her let's make love. This was such an amazing story!

Oh the feels in this chapter. I always figured that they talked about Laura giving up for him when Kara went away. I loved loved the part when Laura said touch me, meaning her cancer breast. It was touching as he sees just how much his neglect on that breast affected her. Loved this chapter!

Oh I love a great BSG fic! It's good that Laura has Bill. Enjoyed there talk about his bed even when she loses her hair.

I loved how you circled back to the themes and dialogue of Ch1 here! It was very poetic and moving. The last line was just beautiful!

This chapter had me on the brink of tears through most of it. The way you wrote what she wanted...no, needed...him to do and his struggle to do so was both beautiful and heartbreaking!

This was such a beautifully imagined and written extension of such a gut-wrenching Roslin&Adama scene on BSG! Of course, it was sexy as hell, too, while also being incredibly intimate and tender. I'm so happy you've started writing fics for them!

Très jolie histoire, surtout l'annonce de Laura sur la mort de sa famille ! C'est très romantique ! J'espère qu'il y aura une suite !

So much emotion going back and forth between them! Love how they come to understand each other after their rift. Laura wanting to make love before she loses her hair is heartbreaking. Well done! :))

Excellent addition to one of my favorite episodes.